rate_review Reviews

Interesting....I wonder why Hermione is still such a coward?

hermione is being an utter bitch, she was in the last page of the last story and she is being a figid bitch now, poor draco.

i hate this hermione rally i do, but its your story and you are getting somewhere, and i am eager to see where. And the fact that u are getting a reaction so strong out of me is that your story is doing its job.

I love that last fantasy. Hermione is being pretty immature. To refuse to speak to Draco and to quit? What can her excuse possibly be?

I did cry and go mental... but, darling, how ever are you going to manage to do it?? I mean, I'm reading your story "A Little Polishing" and to write both at the same time is hard. Hmmm... you can do it!! Keep writing and I'll keep loving you for it.

Oh Hermione, would it really be so hard to have a relationship with him??

great start!! Can't wait for more! :)

Ok I am intrigue, this is more intense than the first one.. There is no children, I think! But hey Hermione have everything she wanted, so why o why? I think I need to wait on you to see... Keep them coming this is good.

*pumps fist in air* Hermione doesn't realize he's a man, not a boy. And he is a Malfoy....who always get what they want. He's still in love with her and vice versa. I really don't understand her hesitation to speak with him. Pshaw to her Gryffindor courage damn it, she's a Hufflepuff right now.

Okay, I'm so sorry but this Hermione is annoying. Not speaking to Draco? Avoiding the issue? Childish and petulance don't become her. What happened to the brave girl from Hogwarts who dealt with Draco when he found the notebook? Sorry! :-)

I must say, even though I was warned, that the start is a bit too slow for my liking but I assume that you were trying to prove something out of Hermione. That is, well, she's having issue about commitment. While Draco is criminologist, it's a bit weird that he couldn't at least guess why she has been behaving that way, then he should have approached her in another way. Anyway, I don't want to point out much about that kind of thing since love is always complicate and this is romance fic, lol. And pardon me, it's just my nature to guess the possibility since I'm working in legal career.

By the way, I rather like the conflict between them. It also makes Hermione sounds more like a real person that's not always perfect. I enjoy reading this story and I'm really looking for more :)