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by ronsmistress

person kazfeist
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The ending certainly was sweet. I love happy endings, for sure. :D
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES DRACO - get your girl! Sorry -- that was unbelievably HOT.

I really also liked the dialogue...your Draco is cool, mature, and so intelligent. Add to that cunning, dominating, confident, sly and HOT DAMN, I want me one.
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bravo he is good but he should be a Healer.. He is goooooooooooood... Love it More please... Please do not make her freak out!! I know is Hermione......
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg for half a second i thought the twist would be that she'd gotten preggers and that was why she so abrupt.... good series so far, i was quite distressed with how your first story ended i am glad there is a sequel indeed, i look forward to reading the rest!!! update again soon!!
person katiekrm
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The only thing I can come up with is that Hermione had Draco's baby. Did she? Will she?
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it!! that wa one hot fantasy! :)
keep it up!
xoxo
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hermione is an enigma... but that spice life. Keep them coming is getting to the part we all want the real deal out of the notebook.
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
go get her Draco....RAWR - be a Slytherin.
person kazfeist
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least you have given us another shading to Hermione's fear. Can't wait to see more. :D
person Robs
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love their exchanges of stories in the notebook. Like Draco has realised, they can tell each other of their desires more easily that way. Look forward to the next chapter!