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for Just Reality

by ronsmistress

person MotekElm
schedule March 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Way more angst and less lemons than the first story, but a happy ending

person Liz
schedule April 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Definitely liked the ending better. Thanks!😃
person Boocat
schedule March 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The ending to this story was much better then Just a Daydream. I love happy endings. I know there aren't enough happy endings in life that when I read I do it to relax and it is good for there to at lest be happiness somewhere. Thank you for writing this sequel.
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful ending!!!!!!!!!!!! Love it short and sweet!!!!!!!!!.. Ok this one is finished and we need more from you so get back to the imagination board and sketch another one and bring it on.
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aaaw cute!
xxx
person Robs
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was such a sweet ending. I'm glad they got back together in the end. Keep up the good work!
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, great ending. I must confess I like it much better that the first. :)
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was just so sweet!
person rini868
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this ending, a lot more than I enjoyed the end of Just a Daydream. It's nice that they're together and have a child :)

Oh and sorry for kicking up such a fuss about the ending of Just a Daydream. You didn't have to write this sequel but you did, so, thank you!
person Rosamund
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great ending, great story...I thought it was funny when you used the word "tart"...which kind? Ha-ha...I am thinking the sweet kind, not the...never mind. Fabulous job!