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for Spellbound

by MysticWitchRini

person qwerty
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's weird seeing Bella as a mother-figure instead of a bat-shit crazy DeathEater...but whatever works for your story!
Keep going!
person tinkita
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! They are so hot!
person tinkita
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Noooo! They were so cute the short time together....
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oho! nice intrigue.
Can't wait to see who is threatening the two. I bet it was Ginny. You had mentioned earlier that she was nuttier than a Pay day.

I hope that Tom get's over his whole reluctance thing quickly though. He needs to protect Harry, not run away from him. Even if he thinks that will protect him. When has that ever worked out? Never.

Lol, Great chapter again.
Looking forward to more!
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hate that person for hurting my boys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Another great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!

person tinkita
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I hope you'll update soon!
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter!
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, you are right, it is a little fast. But thats okay sometimes.
Great Chapter
Looking forward to the next one!
person Blood Lust 777
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*victory gesture* Talk about amazing!
person qwerty
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know you said to don't count Ginny out yet...and this chapter hints at why!! Damn you creepy voice on phone **cough cough Ginny**
Keep going!