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by MysticWitchRini

person Dawnn
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
why would you leave it like that :(( evilness update soon i love this story :D
person lilywood
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man, I love this story!! Great chapter. I guess Ginny will be planning something now. I hope she gets hers.
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa.
Very nice bonding scene. It was intense and still showed that the two cared for one another without being sappy.
Was the hissing Parstletongue? Or is a similar vampire language? I thought that part was really interesting as well as Harry's chest getting tighter during the act. Was that significant? I know all will be revealed in later chapters. I am just a Nosey-Posey. I thought it was funny that Harry had a condom and lube in his nightstand. My mind supplied this little back-story or Harry blushing furiously as he debated on whether or not to put them in there in case Tom showed up. I also had this really funny thought of him asking Sirius for those things and the ensuing awkwardness.

Now there is just the matter of taking care of Ginny (Smiles evily)

Hehehe
Big Kudos!
person yaoiObsessed
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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This is a GREAT story! Love it! Never really been into Tom/Harry stories, but this one is fascinating! Love how Tom is a vamp in this one. But does that last chapter mean that Harry is a vampire now? Oh perfect! I'm glad they're together again and happy. Oh, but what is Ginny gonna do now? Will she try to hurt poor Harry?
I can't wait to see what happens next. Hope the next chapter is up soon! Looking forward to it already! : )
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great scene and a great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!

I hope to see more a necked tom!!!!!!!!!!!!
person kunitsu
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok Ginny being the one who was threatening them was so obvious that I missed it. Oooooooh I love those couple moments in the games, so fun to watch :D
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it!!!!!!!!

can't wait for the sex!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dude! You used it in the story! That's awesome! Lol and I am humbled that you dedicated the chapter to me. That
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I'm glad you liked the turn of phrase. Feel free to use it if you like.

Good chapter. I like that Harry is trying to win Tom back and that Tom might have some idea about it. Should make the sleep over highly interesting!

Looking forward to the next chapter!
person kunitsu
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn I missed two updates but oh well more to read for me :D
Oh I just love it when Draco helps in the make my ex jealous plot, it always promises to cause chaos. Ok I never expected that pairing between Severus and Bella nor did I expect Bella to be sane at all but its a nice surprise. Cant wait to find out who is threatening Harry and Tom

Now from all those plans, I can already tell how fun this sleep over will be *evil crackling* XDDDDD