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As always this was insightful and so interesting! I am so glad Harry is being less of an arse... awww they are the cutest couple!

Okay. I've read all 44 chapters. This story is very sexy. At first I didn't think I'd like reading this story. In fact, to be quite frank, I thought I'd hate it simply because of how it started. But, as a writer myself, I know that you cannot judge an entire story just by the first page, let alone the first chapter. I must say that you have made great progress and I would like to say that you have really grown as an author. I would like to point out, however, just as a courtesy, that there are a few (and yes I do say few) spelling errors that made me cringe just a bit. But, as I understand English is not your native language, it really is difficult. I don't say it to be cruel...just to be honest. I really do love this story though and I do hope you have time to finish this lovely piece. I delight in the fact that Harry has grown in his role as guide and that Severus has finally found his place as sub. The only thing I would like to request is that you add a bit more interaction with Snape and the Centaurs. That was interesting and I would love to see that part progress. Maybe the sub he was speaking with could give Severus some tips on how to understand his feelings more. And perhaps the top could also give Harry guidance, as I'm sure Harry has a little bit of difficulty understanding his own role and Severus' emotions at the same time. All in all, it really is a lovely story and I would love to read more. If you could please give me notice when an update is ready I would love and appreciate it. Thank you.

i am very happy about your a/n in chapter 44 in which you tell us that you are going to continue this story :)

Finally had time to sit and read...

Oh my you said your going to be up to 50 by the time your done *jumps in joy* I am actually happy as I really don't want the boys to go. Congratulations on all the reviews it's good to hear that this story is doing great.

As for the chapter, I actually liked the part where Severus is telling Harry about what happened in the cave with the Centaurs, I actually thought it was actually a very important puzzle piece for their relationship. I really don't know if I feel sorry for Severus to get spankings or it's hot. LOL! Overall this chapter was so insightful, your doing great and keep them coming. I cannot wait to see how far the story goes. Good Luck...

Finally got to read chapter 44!!
Take your time in writing this one!! I am in no hurry for you to finish it, and i am sure, most of your other readers are to!!
Keep up the amazing work!!

I did like the way you put how Amador feels with his lover, and how Severus feels with Harry are about the same. Great job by the way!

I can't wait for you to update soon!

I love how Harry really takes his time with coming up for a fitting punishment for Severus. Great chap!

Having worked with submissives, I found this quite interesting. I mean, great story early on. I was reading fairly eagerly waiting for Harry to get his head out of his ass. As a note, a method of punishment I used, rather than denial of sex, was forced disappointment. A command that my pet could not follow/complete. Works well.

Great chapter. I liked the scene about the centaurs actually. See you next chappie. ;)