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for Deserving (Final Chapter)

by tana97

person God Of Mercy
schedule July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Can't wait for ya to update. Keep up the hard work. oh yeah I was wondering what was up with the centaur thing. What were they talking about? anyways do keep writing I just can't wait. Thanks, Peace!
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha, yay! Awesome chapter, really, really loved it!
person Katastrifix
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter.
(:
absolutely adored it.
Xx.
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating!

its really a wonderful chapter.. harry ca really relate in the situation carl and rogers have been going through since he and severus did experience it once..

hmmm..when will he realize that he loved his husband? will it take him 7years just like ron? i hope not..
it was really wonderful that they had helped the couple to be reunited

can't wait for the next chapter..

please update soon
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You haven't updated for a while.I hope everything is okay.Please do not give up on the story is my favorite Harry/Sev!!!(virtual cookie)for motivation ;)
person Karen
schedule May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I must admit it is painful to see Severus suffering this way. And no, it has got very little to do with Harry. The poor boy is trying to make up for all of his past mistakes, but it is plain that Severus allows himself to perceive/ act/ being treated such ways because he believe he deserves so. And there is noway Harry along would be able to change his belief. Perhaps when he finally realizes his guilt is destroying Harry/ his children? I wonder what and when will be that turning point be in this story, and I'm dying to see it. Please keep up with the good work and update soon!
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating!

i simply really love the chapter specially when Serena called Severus Papa! its so nice..

i really don't get why Severus really kinda worry about Harry's reaction, but still, i think all of them deserve to be happy specially Severus, and i do hope that in the future Harry can make it up to Severus after everything..

can't wait for the next chapter..

i wonder what will they do so celebrate Severus' birthday...XD

please update soon!
person Katastrifixx
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazinggggg. I was waiting forever for this to be posted!
I'm so happy with it, you did a wonderful job, as ususal. Haha.
Thanks for this!
Can't wait for the next.

<333
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeeeaah update!!! Glad you've not abandoned the fic.
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love that harry is finally coming around!! He now knows of his love for sevey!! Soon severus will see he is sooo worthy of harry!! Love that Nevil was put in his place... Cant wait for the next update... so dont want this story to end!!! :D