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for Deserving (Final Chapter)

by tana97

schedule July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was an intense chapter... Loved it!
schedule July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So everyone can now get their magic back... awesome. That last part was a bit disturbing... I never would have thought of that approach. Cheers. Can't wait for more. K
schedule July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating!

oh my! Severus just admit to Harry that he love him, will Harry admit his real feelings to Severus soon?

wow! i definitely love the chapter,Harry is sharing his experience to Severus though its not that detail..
hmmm i wonder what Millicent saw in her vision..

can't wait for the next chapter please update soon!
schedule July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i am wondering why harry wouldn't give severus back his magic? is it something to do that harry and severus' magic cant bond together? though i know that harry has a reason for doing such things, he never did do something without a reason.. i am really hoping that whatever that decision may be will be for the good of severus... but i am really hoping that severus will have his magic back...:)
person Vidori
schedule July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It took me three days to finish this story up to Chapter 48. I'm not usually a fan of Snarry where Snape is the sub, but something about this story kept drawing me back in. Fantastic job and I love how everything seems to be wrapping slowly up. I love how you've done this and I congratulate you on a job well done. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
person vicki
schedule July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i hope that fat mother fucking bitch got everything she dished out and i dont mean being blown up as she did in the third book i hope that she died a most painfull death and that she died a slow one aswell great chappie by the way hope there will be more soon
schedule July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWW. They are so cute. Feel sad about Harry's past but I know Sev will heal his pain as he will do Sev's. So good job.
person Kellly
schedule July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is really good.
schedule July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So is Harry going to get his 'aha' moment? Can't wait for more... K
schedule July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM

What a sweet chapter!!!
I cant wait for the next!!!