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for Deserving (Final Chapter)

by tana97

schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating!

I've been waiting for this story to really update =)

Serena is really a powerful witch when she grows up. So when will Severus be pregnant again?
so many problems they must face, how will the ministry react when they know that Harry and Severus children are powerful, I do hope no one will support single and lang, i hate them both.

Harry should start treating Severus will decency and Severus must be used to that kind of new treatment from his beloved husband.
I really am looking forward to the day when Harry will finally realized that he is in madly and irrevocably in love with Severus Snape-Potter :)

This chapter is wonderfully written. I like Harry's gift to Severus a bonding ring, he deserve to really have it.

please update soon!
person ladywolfinmt
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have just spent two days reading your story from chapter 1 through chapter 49; and I must say at first I wasn't to sure if I liked it or not as Harry was actually so hatefull at first that I couldn't stand him. But then as I kept reading chapter by chapter I was drawn into the story and the almost painfully slow changes in both Harry and Severus and now I love the story. The one thing I really want to see is the Ministry bad guys get their comeuppence big time..lol. You have a lot a talent and I look forward to more stories by you. By the way I am one of your older readers at age 56, just thought you might like to know that not all your readers are younglings...lol. I am very much looking forward to the rest of this story and will check back often to see if you have updated.
person Sofie
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
GREAT story! I just spent my weekend reading all 49 chapters and now I really hope that you'll post the next chapter soon!

I love your take on Harry and Severus' relationship - the ups and downs, the love, the *need*.

Keep up the good work.

~Sofie
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!
What a chapter!!
I cant wait for the next one!
Sev and Harry are developing amazingly as characters!
I love it!!
schedule November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter. The confrontation with the true of why Harry did like the idea to returned Snape's magic. It's good. It's a turning point in the tale. Thanks to continue up-date.
schedule November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* I like that last bit. And if you need a beta, I wouldn't mind betaing for you...
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
when will you update???
person pip
schedule September 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, firstly I can see that you haven
person Walter26
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Dumbledorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrre!"

Aww yeah.
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Why is it that you are so damned amazing?! In the BDSM community there are a lot of things besides a collar to show 'ownership.' Necklaces, bracelets, cuff restraints (bands that go around the wrists/ankles that you can attach chains too) are another common one, rings/bands, and rings (any piercing really). I can't wait to see what you choose. Being a part of the BDSM community I hold a lot of meaning to what a Dom chooses for his Sub.
Update Soon,
KP