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for Deserving (Final Chapter)

by tana97

person Elphaba
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is a great story and a great twist on the normal. I have read it all in the last day and it is excellent. Wonderful job!
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Harry's better off losing the child then- there are so many things that can go wrong during labor...
person ginnyvere
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you're updating very fast :D

OMG, I hope Harry will see reason soon! Poor Sev, he surely hasn't deserved that ):

I'm really curios how it will go on :) It's nice to read a slave-fic with Harry that is still realistic. It's understandable why Harry still hates Snape so much (although I don't like how he handles his hatred) and it's just HARRY that he blames all and everything on Snape. *g*

*bounces around* Thanks for writing this :)
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... dude, you won't let Severus die, right?
I hope harry comes to his senses. I feel horrible for Severus, but all this maltreatment and such makes me want to read more. It's so much more satisfying than a story that is aaaaaall fluff. Though, will Harry every come to love Snape?
person qwerty
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. When is Harry going to wake up?
Good chapter!
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Postively snarling at the screen now. Harry is such a tool. Yep. Women might have been doing it for centuries but blokes, not so much.

I'm very anxious for Severus now and even though I'd love the baby and him to be safe, i'm wondering if them not being is going to kick Harry into sense. Either that or someone else will throw him in a room and beat him up and do it for us, of course.

Really loving this, moonofthesea, and cannot wait until your next update. xx
person Fairner
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
0.0 you post on hpfandom? i have an account wonder if i should post on there lol.
anyway poor Sev he's like the middle man now >__< though harry is so cold...if Sev gets hurt more I'll kill Harry myself, hasn't he finished that book yet? *hmph* lol
ps wonder how Nevile is watching Sev. great chapter, have you thoughts of baby names or am i getting a head of myself....
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this. I am in love with this. *hug* Sev needs a hug.
person akaihimena
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG I cannot believe Harry he is a outright git in this chapter. I feel so bad for Sev. I hope that Poppy gets to him quick. Update soon please! Cliffhangers are mean! XD
person Nikte
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HARRY IS A FUCKING ASSHOLE AND I HOPE HE DIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well no, if he dies his suffering will end, I want him to suffer really suffer, I mean, I know men kinda don