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for Deserving (Final Chapter)

by tana97

schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update. So, the plot thickens eh? Harry's attitude is changing, albeit slowly.
person schabu
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When I started reading this I was shocked (and repulsed) by Harry's attitude and the way he treated Snape. I just wanted to close the story and go read something safer at Fanfiction.net, but I continued reading out of morbid curiosity. Now, whenever you post a new chapter I just keep naively clicking on the refresh button thinking that just maybe theres more LOL. Really, I visit AFF.net everyday to see if there is a new update, seeing a new chapter is like one of the best moments of the day!:D I love this story, and the way Harry is slowly starting to behave. Really, I hate those fics where the character goes from bad to good in a chapter (or in a paragraph!). Keep up the the awesome work. Lol, am I weird if I wanted Harry to try out Snape's milk? Lol I thought it would be funny, embarassing for them and incredibly hot! LOL
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOw amazing I love the angst in the story. I wonder what will happen. I also wonder why harry is sudden;y acting all nice this is weird and from the whole story I don't get that he has a concious except for things that he may never had. He doesn't deny them that but maybe from story he has mental issues. I have no idea just guessing. Good luck on the story.
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i hope that harry will slowly and surely fall in love with snape
person Nikte
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! With whom does this threesome will be? Harry/Neville/Severus perhaps? Can
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this turn!!!
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh God. If I were him I would take the baby and run to any one of the offers on the table.

And Harry doesn't get that he's the bad guy. *shakes head*
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Snape should have negotiated more with Harry. And to think Snape will have to go through everything again... god, that's horrible. But it keeps us reading. It would be really sad if the children could hear Harry beating Snape late at night. It will be sad once they learn how to discern things and see that their father is being beaten needlessly. I am curious to see how this is going to unfold. Good luck and keep up the great work.
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I can feel a change - unconsciously - in Harry already. I love how you write him and Severus! I wonder if Hermione has her fingers in this marriage act...
person qwerty
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!