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I just read all that you have posted so far. I really like this story, please keep up the good work. Thanks for the story.

I think the Ministry needs something like Muggle social workers to check up on the marked ones and their offspring to make sure they're being properly fed and taken care of. Even in the days before slavery was abolished here there were the Grey Laws to make sure people at least treated their slaves (which is basically what the marked ones are) fairly (i.e. taking care of their food, clothing, shelter, and health needs and not inflicting upon them cruel and unusual punishments). I love the way that you show that the "good guys" aren't always good or nice people and that even the best of us can be downright petty at times. I can't wait for the next update!

Ok, who's that man and where did he hide Harry? I just can

*falls over dead with shock*

... *still speechless* He was far less of a tosser than usual. *blinks*

*needs a stiff drink*

Great chapter, can't wait for the next!

Yay!! Harry is 'becoming human' again....well...kinda. Anyways...nice chapter. i wonder what will happen next.

Please forgive me for this because the story is well written and once I started I couldn't stop but Harry is SO out of charactor it's not funny. He is worse than Voldie and Hitler combined. Is this going to change at all during the story becuase I have to admit....I am having a hard time going on. Please forgive me I know I chose to read the story and it is well written and the OOC-ness of Harry and Sev in general draw you in but it's depressing and sad. Please keep writing because you do have talent. I'm sorry if this hurts you in anyway but I have no one to speak with about your story.

I can't wait for the next chapter! Please don't stop writing this story. I've been reading fanfiction for a long time and have seen many a good fic go unfinished. It's very good, so please continue!

Hmmm what does Harry know that Sev doesn't and is his "kindness" going to continue? I hope so because it is getting to be hard to read. Harry is usually a sweet character so having him be basically sadistic to Sev is painful to read at times. Please update soon. i hope to be able to read this to the end. Lets find out shall we XD

Oh, loved this chapter!!!

Even though it is Snape who's suffering physical abuse... and slightly mentally as of lately, he still cares for Harry and excuses him when possible. I don't know if this is to not upset his "master" or because Snape has reached some understanding. Personally, this takes away from pitying just Snape. It's like Harry isn't entirely the one at fault and that's very interesting. I like it very much... if that's you intention. I'm also happy that Snape and Draco didn't get ridiculed during their marriage day. For Snape, it would probably be the only one he will ever go through. And for a while, I thought Harry was actually going to try some of Snape's milk. Hehehe.