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OOOOhh, that was a really sweet chapter, I

Well, Harry is growing as well :D I love how he is changing!

oh! i do like your snape you know! as i am typing on an ipod my review is rather short. i like snape enslaved and pregnant. sadistic harry is ooc, but who cares :)

btw, thank you for explaining the review system to me. i never understood before why people are so keen on reviews. i was not aware that it's connected to a ranking.

i hope this story continues. it makes the heart ache in the perfect way.

Having Richard around is having such a profound effect on Harry. I really love this story. You have a great writing style!
Keep going!

i think that if the other "owners" of the marked ones start thanking harry for protecting their HORRIBLE actions, it may drive his horrible behavior home.

Great chapter. Thank you for updating. I read your A/N and realised that I had been guilty of merely praising the story and the updates and not the writing style/quality or your growth as a writer. I admit that the story has had me so sucked into its plot that I was oblivious of this. However, in your favour, your writing style was in my opinion already of a superior quality from the beginning.

This, along with another WIP Snarry (Situational Ethics by Zega) are my favourite fics. Please take pride in this work as it is excellent and highly entertaining.

This chapter was beautiful, I loved the sex scene, were harry started playing with sev's nipples, its a huge step forward for him! An is Sev starting to enjoy the sex too? after all he did contemplate getting himself off in the bathroom. Lol, but he does get off on harry's attitude, doesn't he? He wants him to be more forceful and in control during sex :D. I loved it! But I was sad that we didn't get to see more sex scenes, I think that during those we can also appreciate the change in their relationship. I loved the end, really, it would have been so sad if Harry was "dada" and sev was just "'ape", I was actually wondering what he would be called when he first called Harry dada. I really liked the chapter. PLEASE UPDATE SOON :D!!!

I love this story, though it is hard for me to read. I like reading dark romance stories, but I've never come across anything like this before.

Lord, is he actually becoming... decent? *blinks* And actually enjoying the sex?!

I do very much love your story, Moonofthesea. xx

That was def ur best chapter yet!
I nearly cried at that last. It was beautifully written.
Poor Sev -hope we get more angst even if Harry's turning 'nicer'