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This is a great story but i mean what is up with Snape...I am sorry I can see him giving in but this is too much it is almost like he cant refuse...I just want to see some fire from him he is a shell of himself :(

CLIFFIE! ANYTHING BUT A CLIFFIE!

Oh my God... How can people be so stupid... Loved theupdates!

OMG!!! What a chapter!! Fantastic!! The Drama!!!
I hope you update soon!!
AMAZING!!!

thank you for updating! :)

I can't believe Single that evil evil man, atleast it made Harry come to his senses to give Severus back his power.. i just really hope that Harry will not be captured by Single and his men. There is still an advantage for Harry since Severus and Richard are invisible they can help Harry but that would be dangerous.
I really hope that they will all come to safety.
I really am anticipating for the next chapter.

please update soon!

WHere to begin I love how you wrote this story man you had me hating Harry I tell ya I was like how can you be this cruel to this man that hadn't done nothing to you. Ohhhhhh and the labor scene I tell you what nah you have got to give me some drugs to help me, but harry felt he need to suffer whooooo I was hoppin mad,but this fool wanted Sev to have TWO more Kids Like that I'm thinking he is slap out of his mind. Then Severus is so nice I love the side that he sooo sweet submissive though I feel he needs to be with Neville ( I know this is a Hary/Snape fic but hey a girl can dream can't see lol) Please Hurry up and give Sev his magic back cause harry need to get over himself he know he loves Sev so just deal with it. Now Draco and Kings Never saw that coming love that pairing they really are good together so since snape and Neville aren;t going to be together find him someone nice that will help him get over Sev. Well you keep on updating I'll keep on reading since I started this story I never knew If I was on my head or standing on my feet any way just keep on doing you and I'll be one of your many fans and I'll keep on reading.

AMAZING!!!
I love how Harry is really starting to get protective over his WHOLE family and I can't wait for the next update!!
Glad you didn't abandon the story!!!

Could HP be more of a dick? I hope this is not one of those stories where SS falls for his abuser. Of course, it does not help that SS has always felt guilty (and paid every day of his adult life) for what he did in his youth. For sure, it won't take long before word of HP's nastiness leaves him without friends and respect of those who know him. And he deserves it! p

Well that is just too aggravating for words. Hermione already told them that SS could still feed the baby and SS is not allowed to claim him anyway. And he is going to put up with torture from the little pig for his child. Does he not think that the kid will see the animousity? That it will not affect his child to see? I may have to wait until this is done and see how it ends as I cannot do with misery or the bad guys winning (for whatever reason). Your story is excellent, but I am just too soft for pure nastiness. p

Huh, still not done? Well thanks so much for the unending revisions that keep circling the nail but never actually hit it, that keep inflating an already overinflated work, for pushing characters to the brink for no reason,* the being so sorry to your readers that after weeks of not sending me anything, i couldn't get back to you within 24 hours and then dropping me without telling me because I dared to voice that i thought something was unneeded. You certainly know how to treat your betas. Good luck to the person you work with next time.

*Gentle readers, this is a conversation I've had to have more than once:

Ellie: look, you've put snape through enough, you just keep rachetting it up but there's no character development. How have the characters changed from the last horrible thing to this one? Isn't this enough for Harry to say 'I love you'?

MotS: No! But now I'm planning on castrating him, I mean, what's the word for the full remval of the genitals?

Ellie: 0_o Why?

MotS: Because.

Ellie: But why? Will it finally show Harry how much he cares about Snape and get him to declare his love etc etc?

MotS: No. But all the other characters will hate him and Snape will have to testify in court and Snape will say he loves Harry but Harry will never say it back.

Ellie: I think you've already gone too far. Harry needs to do something.

MotS: No I don't *think* Harry's ready for it.

Ellie: Then instead of making him do increasingly horrible things why not create a situation where he has to feel differently?!

MotS: Ahhhh Okay, you're uncomfortable with that. Maybe the castration potion fails but Snape gets really sick instead? Man this story's taking so long. I need to do a re-write...

So whatever pros and cons of this story (and good for you those who like the story, and were faithful even at its middle section), trust me, it was much worst in rough draft. Be warned though: don't work with MotS. She's an ungrateful writer.