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I have followed your story from the start and enjoy where you have taken Harry and Severus, but reading your reviews most of your readers are hoping for a happy, cosy ending for this story. It would be good if you could use your considerable imagination and come up with an ending that reduces your readers to tears again, where Severus finds happiness but Harry is left with the misery of what he has lost or vice versus. Then later you could always relent and posts a cosy love filled epilogueand again make everyone cry.
You must be good, I have never written such a long review.

I am reviewing from my phone since my wireless connection isn't working. Anywho, this chapter was far from what I saw coming. Harry taking in a child? Who are his parents? Are they irresponsible? It seems likely since M. is prostituting him out. That was a little disturbing, but not nearly enough to keep me from reading. I must read more now. That and the change harry is going through. Will he ever want to be loved by snape? Will he ever try to court snape for the sake of himself and their children? I look forward to the update. If you keep to the schedule, you'll be updating on my birthday and that will make my day. Thank you for the update

"Severus

Yay, totally loooved the updates!

Oh my god. That was so hot. klahfahsclch. *random keyboard mashing*

*GLOMPS YOU*

You are a good writer. I feel like watching a car accident, I just can not stop reading this story. I think if Severus and Harry are going to live happily ever after in the end I will throw up.

Wow, awesome chapter, it was so damn sexy in a kind of dark angsty way, I loved it!!!!!!!!! You deserve a big box of cookies, hope you enjoy them. It

This was a wonderful update!
I've noticed how you've improved in your writing, too. :)
I read your other stories and this is a VAST improvement! (And they were pretty good, too - just technical stuff like spelling and grammar etc)

I hope Harry comes around and realises how awesome Severus is! Maybe he should let Severus treat him like he's been treated for a few days to see how he likes it! Including the bottled semen! Ha!

Wonderful work. I can't wait to see more!

Even if you were late with your posting it's nobody's position to complain at all! :-|

I still want to slap him with a wet kipper. And something harder behind that to send the message home.

I hate how Severus believes he's done things to deserve punishment. It's so cruel. :(

I've read and loved this story from the first chapter, although this is the first time I've had time to review, instead of just rating. Awesome chapter, and I love how the plot just thickens. This is the first bottom!Snape story I've ever even liked, and you've written it so well that I cannot not love it! Amazing story, really.

I look forward to Wednesdays update! One thing though, Dennis is called Denise several times in the beginning of this chapter ;) But otherwise, AWESOME. I can't wait for Sev to realize he is falling for his husband, cause he obviously are!

Love,
Pilly/bored137654 (was too lazy to log in XD)