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Thank goodness...Harry is becoming human!! I hope for more soon because I fell so bad for the marked ones.

OH, I just love your story soooo much :D

Yay!! I'm happy the baby is better :) Looking forward to more.

It's nice to see Harry being a little nicer to Snape finally. The situation with the babies makes me sad and angry, but I'm glad people are finally doing something about that too. I have a feeling that Harry's attachment to the new baby bodes ill somehow........either because he will be heartbroken having to give it back or will face political problems and more fighting with his friends for refusing to give it back to it's birth parents. Oh, and this might seem like an odd question, but what if a woman wanted to be a guide for one of the Marked Ones? Would she have to take a potion to become a man long enough to impregnate her charge or do they just not allow women to be guides? This question has been nagging at me since chapter 3, so I finally had to ask. And after all that...........let me say again what an amazing story this.............in case it just seemed I was complaining. Can't wait for the next chapter!



If you would like to e-mail me about the question or if you ever need a beta or something, I'm gutter_drunk_kitty@yahoo.com.

Loooved the updates!!!

Oh wow, all I can say is that I love this story. I can see how much, with time, Harry has changed. But what I like the most is that Harry didn't automatically go from being angry and hard one moment and soft and in love the next. It's sorta like the changes are slowly creeping up on him, and that it's going at such small degrees that he doesn't even really realize it.

In comparison, Snape in my opinion has also grown mentally, on one end of the spectrum he has become meeker, softer and willing to please. But on the other side he has grown, become stronger, caring not only for the children but for his spouse. In a way he's sorta teaching harry, helping him recapture some of the characteristics he had before the war tarnished his character.

Anyway enough of my ramblings. I love the story so far, and I can't wait to read eve more of it.

I do love this story. I'm eager to see what happens next. One little thing: you say that the process is painful because unicorn's blood hurts, but since drawing the blood probably wouldn't involve much contact, I think you mean that the saliva hurts, since that's actually in contact during the exchange. Update again soon!

~Hazel

Finally Harry is becoming human. I hope for more soon. It's been good!

Hey there! This chapter was promising. There is an amazing change with harry and his attitude regarding severus. I am wondering now if they are going to exchange a chaste kiss soon and I am also wondering if ginny is going to be at the birthday party and if harry will long for her. How will severus react to that? I want to thank you for the quick updates. You have no idea how happy they make me and encourage me to continue reading your work. I am looking forward to your next update. And my birthday is tomorrow, the 16th =3
~zega

That was a lovely update and for once, i'm not screaming about how much I bloody hate Harry, he was somewhat decent there! ;)

I hope nobody comes for Nicky, although that would seem a little too easy if they didn't. I also liked how Harry didn't prevent Severus from taking on his role during the potion making. Hopefully it shows him growing as a person.

Can't wait for more :)