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for Deserving (Final Chapter)

by tana97

schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update. Excellent chapter as usual.

It's completely understandable that you are changing your publishing routine. You are right that writing should be a hobby and not a chore. Great work anyway and look forward to the new weekly updates :)
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I abso love this story!!
I hope the shock of Sev's attack has shown harry his feelings for him!! We can all see it!!lol!!
Love this story!
I hope you enjoy writing it as much as i enjoy reading it!!
If its stressing you - take a break!! I know all you loyal readers will wait!!
;-)
person linky4u
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. thanks for the update. I love how Harrys and Severus relationships slowly develops. But when are Harry going to realise his true feelings..? I fully understand that you gonna update once a week,it
person arisblaze
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You might want to explain who captured Snape & Draco & why-
it lost me.
person Logan
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really do love this story, I think I'm addicted to it now - I check everyday just incase there is an early update and then I reread the entire story or just my favourite chapters.

As you said, the story is your hobby, one that you have gifted to your many dedicated readers, and if you feel the need to reduce to updating once a week then I'm happy with that - my Deserving addicted brain will readjust and acclimatise soon enough. I'd rather you were a happy author than a stressed one.

Thank you for another great chapter
Logan
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this. I like how you have Harry reluctantly getting used to Sev and also not being able to send him away as he first intended. I hope that Kings 'crew' are able to save many more 'Marked Ones' and hopefully the 'Guides' will be punished, eventually. ^_^ Can't wait for more. K
schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And could vengeance drive someone blind to the point of hurting their husband too... *whistle*

And i'm glad Neville finally used the word brainwashed, as well.

xx
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!! Harry is comming on so well!! I love the way you developed his character, the transition was done so good!!
and the story is great!!
person squeaker
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. I am happy that Harry is finally starting to treat Severus better. Hmmm, can't wait for the next update.