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September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapter 20.
I am finding this adventure into a dark Harry both disturbing and extremely interesting. You've apparently thought this out, and you're proceeding very well. Harry seems a bit less sympathetic than I would have thought to people being starved, but I'm trusting that things will work out. Please keep going, this is one of the best I've read recently.
Your note at the end was both a surprise and a delight to me.
I thought I was the only author, besides my husband, who quite often found that a chapter, or a complete story, developed a mind and a life of its own. Don't fight it, even if you can. You will find that the story flows better, and turns out more interesting and cohesive, this way.
If you need to talk or if you want to know about my adventures in writing, drop me a line.
I am finding this adventure into a dark Harry both disturbing and extremely interesting. You've apparently thought this out, and you're proceeding very well. Harry seems a bit less sympathetic than I would have thought to people being starved, but I'm trusting that things will work out. Please keep going, this is one of the best I've read recently.
Your note at the end was both a surprise and a delight to me.
I thought I was the only author, besides my husband, who quite often found that a chapter, or a complete story, developed a mind and a life of its own. Don't fight it, even if you can. You will find that the story flows better, and turns out more interesting and cohesive, this way.
If you need to talk or if you want to know about my adventures in writing, drop me a line.
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September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good luck with the new position and all the extra work it brings!!
Loved the chapter, take your time on writing it!!lol!!
Loved the chapter, take your time on writing it!!lol!!
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September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, and things were going so well :( Just because Severus finally gets a little release.... oh Harry, I was really starting to come round to you. *sighs*
I know what you mean about getting sidetracked by reviews. It's happened to me a few times!
I know what you mean about getting sidetracked by reviews. It's happened to me a few times!
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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I found another story of your yeah! I can't wait for the next chapter. By the way, I love it. and please don't change nothing, for me it's perfect.
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September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! I think Baby is probably blind, cause he is so unresponsive to everything and everyone. Anyway, I can
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, absolutely sodding brilliant! I love the mixed emotions Harry is displaying; passionate, posessive and yet disgusted with his desire for a man. Seriously conflicted...
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, everytime I think it is going well, something blows it up. It is soo well written!
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, here I was, thinking Harry was getting a little better, then at the end of the chapter, he goes and blows it. You are doing an incredible job with this story and I can undestand the homework and job thing. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow, their releationship is buding!!
I love this story line...
You have an amazing tallent!!
I love this story line...
You have an amazing tallent!!
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August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful chapter!!! I loved the claiming scene :D Brilliantly written.