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for Deserving (Final Chapter)

by tana97

person Lilianblack
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
at first I really didn't like this story, for some reason, Snape and Harry relationship just tugged me the wrong way. it almost physically hurt me to see Snape and Harry so broken. but i pushed through the chapters and now I'm glad i stayed with it. you are a wonderfull writer. and i look forward to reading more
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet, can't wait for more... K
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved! Snape and Harry deserve a family. Is very good the step by step change of Harry.
person Dee
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally captivated by this story. I couldn't stop reading, and thought the writing improved with every chapter. I like the way Harry doesn't fall head over heels for Snape, but gradually comes to build a family with him.

I can't wait for Snape to get pregnant again, since I think we'll see a more indulgent Harry.
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter but how weird is this: I've been sat here reading the chapter after finishing work (midnight) in between watching a film that I've not seen for years on the television.

It's Ghost with the late, great Patrick Swayze. Spooky!
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating this was a really wonderful chapter Harry is more open to Severus and everyone is starting to realize that Harry is not mean anymore oh that is so good. keep them coming.

and Good luck with your job.
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That opening scene between them is one of the loveliest in the whole fic, I think.

I just feel the eternal want for them both to meet and *enjoy* each other.
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thanxz for the update it's my brithday and it totaly sucked everyone forgot ecept a two people but your update just made it so much better thanx again and i love this story i read all your stories and you have a great talent you should really nurture it.
person sandfull_a
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That's a wonderful story. Reading first chapters before Harry started changing his attitude, I had tears in my eyes.. and I mean tears. Now I am pretty happy with how the action proceeds and hope you will update often. Thank you.
person alexsei
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, how cute! Love the chapter, and how well your story always flows