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for Deserving (Final Chapter)

by tana97

person Anon
schedule July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Glad for the update! Can't wait for more.
Xx.
schedule July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how sweet, what a beautiful update :)
schedule July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating!

Thank goodness there was a reinforcement, I am happy that Harry & Severus and their children are for now safe.
I never thought the turn out of events, but I like it. How will Harry react to what Severus told him? Is it really possibly that their magic will bond? Does that mean that what Harry thought before was wrong that his magic and Severus' can't bond? I just hope that it will not ruin the afterglow they are feeling...

Please update soon!
person Judith
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How can you stop at this point?? I need more!!
person Z~K
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
absolutely cant wait for the next chapter :) love where the story plot is moving. :)
schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow excellent chapter. Please continue, I love the idea of Snape with magic and willing to continue summiting to Harry, but ferocious defender of his childrens. I will love to see Harry in a more important position in politics in the end.
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YES! Sev's magic is back!! More!! K
person Debby
schedule April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this on Saturday and could not stop until I had read all the chapters that are done. I love it! Fantastic! Is there a way to receive notices as to when it updates? I am snape504@yahoo.com
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So harry just became what he hates he is worse then a DE..and I think Snape and the rest should go and hide and take the child Harry does not deserve to be a father!
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2..im just crying now..what is wrong with Harry..it would serve him right if snape lost the child due ot his abuse..someone has to get snape now!!!