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for Deserving (Final Chapter)

by tana97

person batfacedgirl
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!
person Bunnybop05
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally it would seem our lil wizard has finally begun to show his heart. I hope Singles suffer a slow and excruciating demise.
person anhelo
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Tomorrow it's my birthday and as a gift I really would like an update!Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee lol
I promess you a long review in exchange!
Anhelo
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I say let Harry run for minister and win and kick everyones ass...even though we know he would hate the job. He would be good at it & he would clean up the corruption. Great chapter.
person k
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How could i have missed something so great as this. I can't believe how good this is.
person Kirikos
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really, really, really love this fanfic! I was reading from first chapter to 26 in 3 days and you really improve your writing. Im so curious about all next chapters, especially about Severus, because i love him so much in this story. I think that he deserve a little good feelings from Harry!
And Richard and Kreacher are both lovely :D But I dont like Dennis and Hermione.
Kirikos
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Me encant
person Nestedis
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!
I just read through your story the whole day. I couldn't stop to read... it was so awesome, overwhelming, stunning, amazing, wow... It was the best story I read in a long while.
Your story is amazing! The relationship between Harry and Severus is so... I don't know how to say it... First I wanted to punch Harry in the face for all the things he did to Severus. But now he is so caring. And I just can figure out what has happened to Severus. Why is he forgiving all the things to Harry?

I AM REALLY CURIOS HOW THE STORY WILL GO ON! YOU ARE GORGEOUS!
(and sorry for my poor English, it is not my native language...)
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So... I wonder when Harry will stop calling him Snape and call him Severus... Just a thought... K
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter!! Dont be unhappy with it!!
Couldnt wait for the update!!
Love Sly...
Lets find him a girlfriend...
Tara maybe!!lol!! ;-p

Cant wait for the next one!!
You developed the characters excellently!!
:-)