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November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg! what will happened next, will they have another child? Oh I cannot believe you, left us in a cliff again. I think you enjoy that, this chapter was really beautiful, but what I love most is that in one chapter you make me hate Harry and in others you make me love him. As for Severus I always want to hug him.
Cannot wait for the next chapter, PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! Update soon ^_^
Cannot wait for the next chapter, PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! Update soon ^_^
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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i dont knwo how to feel about this story at all... im completely flabergahsted and discusted by harry but at the same time i feel kinda bad for him being such an idiot like seriously when is he gonna get a clue? anyway update soon please!
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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I want more! Good chapter.
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
beautiful.
he's calming down a bit. good to see. jealous rage, however misguided, still somewhat encouraging. it'll be nice when harry finally realizes how much snape actually cares for him.
richard is adorable. i almost wish he could actually hex harry a little.
this is really nice work.
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he's calming down a bit. good to see. jealous rage, however misguided, still somewhat encouraging. it'll be nice when harry finally realizes how much snape actually cares for him.
richard is adorable. i almost wish he could actually hex harry a little.
this is really nice work.
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Harry gets so impulsive sometimes... I loved how Severus turned the discussion to another topic when Richard arrived.
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November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, Loved it, Loved it!!
Cant wait for more!! :-)
Cant wait for more!! :-)
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November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loooooved :D
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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a really interesting chapter, first I love how you letting us view more into their marry life, and second love the way everything is coming along. I just love this story so much, but now I have a question for you when are they going to have their second child I would love to see more and what happen to the bad guys too.
But overall I still think your a great writer and I cannot wait to see(read) the next chapter.
But overall I still think your a great writer and I cannot wait to see(read) the next chapter.
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October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lovely - i wouldn't object to harry to go through with his initial threat and force severus into prostitution. hee. but obviously this is not that kind of story, so there. but the tale as it is still appeals to my inner sadist, in a good way :)
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October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. If you would like an idea, you could have Harry reward Snape again and have Snape ask if Harry could just once call him by his given name 'Severus' and this could lead to the next step in Snapes and Harry's relationship if you are heading that way. It is a suggestion, but this story is great keep up the good work.