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for Deserving (Final Chapter)

by tana97

person BWilde78
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I NEED CH. 32 RIGHT NOW!!!
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I am really getting to the point where I want to stick my foot up Harry's ass. He is SO stubborn! He obviously thought that he knew more about potions than a Potions Master even though he barely passed the class. He may not beat Severus, but there are many, MANY forms of abuse and being abused as a young boy< Harry should know that. And what does he think? He thinks he knew Dumbledore better than people like Minerva, who had been working with Albus for longer than Harry had been alive? He has no IDEA what the old man was thinking when he ordered Severus to kill him.

Harry is a effing idiot!
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God!! That was sssooo worth the delay. Best chapter EVER MotS!
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn I was ready with my torch. Oh well will have to put it away.

This was one incredible chapter, I hated Harry so much I just want to smack him. How could he give that potion to Severus? Why does he want to change the person Severus is? Doesn't he love him of at least like him?

Omg and you left us in a cliff again, why? Oh well will have to wait for the next do not stop you are doing great.
I know you said that you re-wrote, but it looks good.
person Kelly
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That is cruel to leave it there. More soon.
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You better update soon!!
I am sooo confused!!!
Still a well wrote chapter!!
But you better update soon!!
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ack.... was not expecting that at all.. whoa how ever will he get out of that mess..
schedule November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's called common law marriage and my brother went through that, that is until my mother convinced them to marry for real ^_^ This is a great story and I have really enjoyed it... Can't wait for more.. K
person KKla4
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You labeled this chapter as 39 when it is 30
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank You for an amazing story!!
I cant believe you left it on a cliffy!!
Please up date soon!! Cant wait to see what happens next!!
:-)