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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Ok, seriously, I'm not going to read another chapter until this is completed and I can skip (or at least skim through the most important details of) the HORRIBLE angst, because THIS is TOO FUCKING MUCH. Really, cut them some FUCKING SLACK! Don't marry him off to Neville; you can't keep the story in the Harry/Snape section then and it will DESTROY everything that WAS good with this story. Horrible idea. Don't even think about it again. Shame on you! I feel like screaming. DO NOT DO THIS TO ME.

I agree with Jess/Jessy/whatever, I'm not reading another chapter until you have made sure Severus is NOT marrying that FUCKING TOAD Neville. I really loved this story up until a few chapters ago. I craved every new chapter, I even waited up on the days I knew you'd update. Then you went and destroyed it when it was finally coming to a happy closure. I can usually handle angst, but this is just ridiculous. You do not separate them like this and keep your readers, just so you know. Kill Neville, get him away from it. He does NOT, I repeat NOT, belong anywhere NEAR Severus, ESPECIALLY NOT in this story. There's been enough angst, really. You don't get to pull one of these at the finish lines. If Severus does indeed marry Neville, I am going to stop reading this and remove the link from the 4 fic rec lists it's been on. Neville destroys the charm of the story. He's suposed to be Harry's friend. Honestly. Harry did more for him than Snape EVER did. He was scared shitless for him. I do love Severus, and I know Harry's been bad to him, but really, give them a fucking break. Give us readers a fucking break, or all of us who can't stand mroe angst are going to be leaving.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter. If Neville STILL intends on breaking them apart after hearing Snape admit he loves Harry and even admitting they are soulmates, I am NOT returning after that.

I hate Neville, Minera, & Sprout...I am actually starting to get pissed off! I don't know if that makes it a good story or something I need to stop reading.

No, no, no, no! Harry never said why he did it!! I want to know damnit! Update soon or I'm going to have a heart attack. Lovely chapter as always.
KP

OMG! Neville bloody Longbottom! Married, divorce Harry?! (Veracityrules can't handle these plot developments and swoons disbelief)

Oh oh... I really hope Neville is not gonna do what Severus asked him to do and instead is going to get Harry out anyway...
He just has to see how much Severus loves Harry, no way is he gonna continue if he knows it will make Severus suffer more, right?

I don't think you should let Harry get off scott-free, with just the divorce. He's done more cruel and inhuman things to Snape than anything a Death Eater could ever have done - and before you rise up and challenge that, let me remind you that at the end of a Death Eater's playing with you, they killed you, or you died from your injuries. Snape has not died, and there has been no end to it - and after the marriage, Richard is two in the current chapter,that's a LONG time -, although you have had Harry soften towards him. I think Harry needs serious mental counseling, and yes, even imprisonment. The authorities that have the power to force him into marriage can certainly force other things upon him, with the support of the community behind them. And at this point wouldn't Single just love to screw Harry up?

Woah! Intense... Keep 'em coming... K

Wah! Why must you bring me near tears with these chapters?! Another brilliant chapter, I can't wait for the next angsty one to appear.

Oh noooooo!
I almost wasn't able to read the last 3 chapters. Oh my gosh, what have you done? *cry*
I so dearly want a happy end for Harry and Severus and you just break them apart....WAAHH...

:) BUT: I am really curios what will happen next. I hope you will update soon. Because nethertheless your story is addictive and I just can't get enough of it :)