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October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just one word! (I hope you still read your reviews ;)
I noticed that at least when I click on the description of your story I can't find Mpreg warnings (or any warnings at all). To me it doesn't matter since I love Mpreg, Slave!Snape and Bottom!Snape but I thought maybe you could consider putting up warnings? I think some readers don't want to read Mpreg (or Botttom!Snape) stories. This way your lovely story would draw the right crowd of readers :)
I noticed that at least when I click on the description of your story I can't find Mpreg warnings (or any warnings at all). To me it doesn't matter since I love Mpreg, Slave!Snape and Bottom!Snape but I thought maybe you could consider putting up warnings? I think some readers don't want to read Mpreg (or Botttom!Snape) stories. This way your lovely story would draw the right crowd of readers :)
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October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes, what a romp! I enjoyed this tale a lot! And thank you for sticking to it until the very end! I am sure at some point it must have been tempting to desert it! I wish you much luck with your original fics!
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October 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg! I cant believe this story has come to an end! loved it from start to finish! feel free to add a chapter every now and then!
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! An excellent tale and a beautiful ending. I loved it was awesome.
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, I must say this was an original plot, disturbing sometimes but kept me interested and wanting to know what happened next. Good Fic.
By the way, this site has a section for original stories, or there is fictionPress.com, I hope you continue writing.
By the way, this site has a section for original stories, or there is fictionPress.com, I hope you continue writing.
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy and so so sad. I have been reading this story since the very beginning and I am so happy that everyone got their happy ending. But I am so sad that it is over. Congratulations on a great story. THis is probably one of the better stories I have read on here. I loved the plot and the angst and the happy parts. I love the ending but am still a little sad to see it come to an end.
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August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Rubbish. Utter rubbish.
I'm only on Chapter 25, but everything about this makes no sense.
A: How did you forget that Snape DIED in Deathly Hallows but remembered that Hedwig did?
B: What is your fascination with mpreg? It is a disturbing subject that quite frankly I see no appeal for. Only women get pregnant. That is the way reality should be.
C: Why in the hell are the Marked Ones being treated like this? Did Harry forget everything in Deathly Hallows? Snape tried to help him many times. Snape wasn't even responsible for Sirius' death (THAT WAS BELLATRIX LESTRANGE. A COMPLETELY SEPERATE CHARACTER. She probably deserves to be tortured, but Snape not so much. Even then, she doesn't deserve to be forcibly impregnated.), or James and Lily (That was Voldemort. It was Peter Pettigrew who ratted them out to Voldemort. You ever read the books?), and if you read Deathly Hallows, Harry should be aware that Snape was asked by Dumbledore HIMSELF to kill him. Really, Harry has no justification for doing this to Snape. Remember, two wrongs don't make a right.
This is a very disturbing fic that clearly shows you haven't read the books that closely - or you're taking MANY liberties with the storyline - and JK Rowling would be ashamed that you have twisted her universe this way.
I'm only on Chapter 25, but everything about this makes no sense.
A: How did you forget that Snape DIED in Deathly Hallows but remembered that Hedwig did?
B: What is your fascination with mpreg? It is a disturbing subject that quite frankly I see no appeal for. Only women get pregnant. That is the way reality should be.
C: Why in the hell are the Marked Ones being treated like this? Did Harry forget everything in Deathly Hallows? Snape tried to help him many times. Snape wasn't even responsible for Sirius' death (THAT WAS BELLATRIX LESTRANGE. A COMPLETELY SEPERATE CHARACTER. She probably deserves to be tortured, but Snape not so much. Even then, she doesn't deserve to be forcibly impregnated.), or James and Lily (That was Voldemort. It was Peter Pettigrew who ratted them out to Voldemort. You ever read the books?), and if you read Deathly Hallows, Harry should be aware that Snape was asked by Dumbledore HIMSELF to kill him. Really, Harry has no justification for doing this to Snape. Remember, two wrongs don't make a right.
This is a very disturbing fic that clearly shows you haven't read the books that closely - or you're taking MANY liberties with the storyline - and JK Rowling would be ashamed that you have twisted her universe this way.
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July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow!!
Is all i can say! sooo cute!!
Dont leave us waiting to long to find out how harry is going to save his family?!
Is all i can say! sooo cute!!
Dont leave us waiting to long to find out how harry is going to save his family?!
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July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well I have just started reading Adultfiction.net and this is the first story I find... While reading it in the beginning I thought it was a little too morbid for my taste, because of the way Harry acted towards Severus Snape. You see I didn't even like the end of Harry Potter because Severus died after all the hell he went through to keep Harry alive after Lilies death. I am a huge fan of the actor that played Severus Snape since I last saw him in Dogma... I fell in love with his voice.. But I would love to see the end of this marvelous story cause it kept me at the edge of my seat and even my husband read it with me.... You have a great talent for writing this kind of stories...
Hope you let me know if you write some more new ones... I love to keep on writing your work...
Sincerely Elena
Hope you let me know if you write some more new ones... I love to keep on writing your work...
Sincerely Elena
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July 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
more this is so great