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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow, it sounds as if both could eventually be happy with other people... But i do so want Harry and Severus together...
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
if u keep up this crap with sev/nevile relationship i wont even bother to read this story anymore....i couldn't wait to read a new chapter, but right now it's just anoying...sev and harry are meant to be together...so fuck mcgonagall and that medic witch bitch! i hate that nevile imbecile and that denis moron...and everyone else who comes between harry and sev
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg really!!! you are killing me here. I just want sev to be happy! poor thing has been through so much. Harry is a douche as far as i'm concerned anyway, I have been following this story since it first started. I never expected it would become such an epic piece of literature. I can't wait for your next chapter I only wish you could post more frequently but it's ok at least you are not letting it die like what happens to most fics lately. I love the direction you are going in and I am very excited to see how everything turns out in the end. Happy New Year!!
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating soo quickly, keep 'em coming!
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whew, I just read all 35 chapters in one sitting! I am enjoying your story very much, and can't wait to read the next chapter.
Even though the story is categorized as Harry/Snape, I really, really, really hope that Severus ends up with Neville instead. I'm sorry, but Harry is such a rat bastard: telling Severus how ugly he is, taking his pleasure without giving any in return, expecting Severus to take a potion to cut his penis off!! And now his sick little pleasure at the thought of taking Dennis's virginity?!? What an ass -- growing up neglected doesn't begin to excuse this reprehensible behavior. Severus deserves to learn what real love is from a kind person like Neville.
Even though the story is categorized as Harry/Snape, I really, really, really hope that Severus ends up with Neville instead. I'm sorry, but Harry is such a rat bastard: telling Severus how ugly he is, taking his pleasure without giving any in return, expecting Severus to take a potion to cut his penis off!! And now his sick little pleasure at the thought of taking Dennis's virginity?!? What an ass -- growing up neglected doesn't begin to excuse this reprehensible behavior. Severus deserves to learn what real love is from a kind person like Neville.
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December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, the amended of the chapter 34 make more easy and enjoyable the reading. The tale is brilliant.
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December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, Harry is stll a bastard in this chapter but he's getting there. Poor Sev, (sigh) He really doesn't know what love is. Update soon Please! I love this story!
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December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Am I the only one who sees a little conspiracy here between Dennis and Neville? Isn't it convienient that Dennis is WAITING for Harry in the house when he gets home? And this sudden declaration of love by Dennis. I'm smelling conspiracy here and it can go two different ways. Also, what is this mystery illness of Harry's? Hope that you update soon. Have been anxiously awaiting new chapters for long time. Am seriously hooked on this story. So far, has not disappointed. I think fanfiction is great and trying to always write the characters in canon is dull. The reviews blasting you for making Harry a bit (!!!) evil are hilarious. This is your story, your world and you do with them as you think is right. Knock yourself out and have fun with this. Remember, every story that is written out of character pisses JKR off and she "deserves" it after that stupid epilogue.
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December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i hope harry doesn't treat dennis badly. i'm really sad that they are moving on. its understandable thought but still sad. i'm really mad at harry adoptive family. how can they do that to him. harry needs help. its a good thing that he still have dennis. please don't let harry hurt him. he actually my favorite in this story.
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December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I am so lucky, now that I have time to read, I find out that you updated twice. K now on to the review.
I want to hit Harry I think he should have fought longer for Severus, but I do understand that he actually thought that that was what Severus wanted. As for Harry and Dennis now that I was not expecting, I hope that when they reunite back Harry will learn to love and show it and for Severus to know what he wants and does not.
Another incredible chapters, I cannot wait until the next one and as you will not post before New Year's HAPPY NEW YEARS!!!!!!
I want to hit Harry I think he should have fought longer for Severus, but I do understand that he actually thought that that was what Severus wanted. As for Harry and Dennis now that I was not expecting, I hope that when they reunite back Harry will learn to love and show it and for Severus to know what he wants and does not.
Another incredible chapters, I cannot wait until the next one and as you will not post before New Year's HAPPY NEW YEARS!!!!!!