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for Deserving (Final Chapter)

by tana97

schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, absolutely awesome. I seriously think that should mollify some of the bemoaners of the recent updates. You had us going there for a while.

Great update, I just hope there will be further updates sooner rather than later.
person Angelstone
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story soooo much. You really have done a great job at it and I always can't wait for more!Keep up the good work you really have talent. I can't wait until Sev and Harry get back together again :)
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! They had sex again, yes, it was bloody time if you ask me. Now what will happen next. Will Snape get pregnant of that encounter? and will Neville find out? and what about Creevey? I can not wait for the next chapter, every single time I read a new chapter I always want more. But still I want to hit Harry for using Severus in that way and not being upfront of why he is actually doing it, but oh well we cannot as then who we would hate. Keep it up your doing marvelous.

person Tryysta
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!
Every time I see a new chapter is posted I almost get nervous, I hate seeing Harry not realize he is such an idiot about Snape and how he treats him. It just seems so wrong to have them with different partners, but you make it work and have written a fantastic story. I read many many stories and this is the first I have reviewed in a long time.
Keep up the good work!
person kns
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i cried. that was so sweet. i was wondering. did harry do the contraception charm or something? was this planned because he wanted to be w/ snape?
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH was soo happy to see this if only they stayed together....
person Megan
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! We're getting back on track. How long will it take for these two dunderheads to realize they love each other? Really?
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YES! YES! YES! MORE! MORE! MORE!
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Mylap top was murdered!! So i had to wait a while before i could read the last few chapters!!
WHAT!!Harry and Denis, Snape... not with Harry!! WTF!!!
I trust you, so i wont go psycho on you ;-)
Cant wait for the next update, last 3 where fantastic!!!!
person Kate
schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like how your making Snape learn that he CAN live without being punished. Also love the way you just gave us a huge hint about why only 2 kids have magic. Bet Harry wasn't the only one needing help that day ;-) Kingsley doesn't strike me as a sadist. I hate Harry so if Snape finds happiness with anyone else I'll be happy but I hope you have Harry realize what an ass he's been. Love the story.