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for Deserving (Final Chapter)

by tana97

person Nefrena
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You know it's going to suck for poor Denis when Harry goes to have sex with him and Harry is sorely disappointed. He isn't going to taste, react, or feel like Severus and that is going to kill Harry. I really do feel sorry for Denis in all of this.
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story dear! I can't wait for an update. When you read this please, please email me. I have a proposition for you and I hope you'll agree. Anyway, Please email me @ LadySai1990@yahoo.com when you get a chance. It will be much appreciated! :-)

P.s I never review a story unless it makes my heart jump!!
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Gosh... This was so good and sad at the same time... Both too blind to tell the other's real emotions... Loved!
person Abby
schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I can't wait until the next chapter! They are so sad, I hope they get back together.
person Elvira
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
=D
person chavela25
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just want them to resolve things already.
person catnona
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, update! Idiots the both of them. I really hope they realize soon that they love and want each other as much as the other one does. And that everyone else stops interfering!
person anhelo
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
it was an amazing chapter, at the beginning I was thinking how rude Harry was to ask that to Severus and finally it helps him to realize that he wants his ex-husband back, but will he be brave enough to do it? will he admit that he loves him?will he be strong enough to prove that he can change? (so much questions!)
I hope you'll upadte soon
Anhelo
person seshy
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yesssss!!! i loved it! finaly i can see a light at the end of the tunnel..this chapter was realy yummmy
thanks for telling me about the new chapter