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for Deserving (Final Chapter)

by tana97

schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Such an absolutely beautiful chapter, and all on Valentine's! Thank you, dear! Great timing!
person veracityrules
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Once again, an excellent chapter. I have been waiting with bated breath for this update. Thank you.
person Elvira
schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absulutly LOVED IT! I Loved it! Espacialy the smex part! Update soon!
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes, a new chapter...

Oh, this was great they are together all ready, and finally marry. They put every single one of those nosy know it all people on their place. It look as if you have created a whole new couple with Neville and Dennis or is it just me.

As for Severus and Harry, I actually thought that Sev was all ready pregnant, however, later I learn that he was not, but at the end it sounds like they have a baby in the oven or more like they made one. Oh, I so hope.

I cannot wait for the next chapter and please, please tell me that this is not over, as I feel that and it sounds as if this is almost the end. However, if it is I hope you have your next story in the process as I want more after this.

Keep them coming you are doing great.
person alexia
schedule February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please update soon thanks
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to tell you how much I love this story and your grasp for the characters, especially Snape's. Thank you for keeping it going!
person precocious
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really love your story, but please please remove the parts about snape kneeling to dumbledore unless it is vital to the plot. the d/s relationship is obvious enough not to need such crude emphasis.
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yippieh! Finally, I can't believe it!
person chavela25
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Malfoy's Bitch
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please dont say this is the end!! I love this story!!
And there is so much to write on... A quick epiloge just wont do!lol!!
I loved their reuniting... it was sooo sweet! Loved it!!