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for Deserving (Final Chapter)

by tana97

person Elvira
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOHHHH! Thats tough, I have no idea what you should do.

HHHMMMMMM.....

Well hope you figure it out, and update real soon!
schedule February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, I so dont want you to wrap this story up!! I Love it!!
Just got a chance to read the last few chapters... AMAZING!!!
schedule February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, awesome chapter!
schedule February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lovely! too bad that even the longest stories have to end sometimes :) i enjoyed it a lot! snape's suffering was so deliciously long and graphic (thanks for that!)

another round of pregnant!severus would be so nice but i suppose one shouldn't be too greedy :)
schedule February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg, this story is like the first one to ever make me cry. i feel so bad for snape, and i can so understand how he is feeling. i LOVE ur story.
person veracityrules
schedule February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
No...no not the end of this story! Never ending! Just keep going and going and oing and going and going! We want to see the birth of all the Potter-Snape babies.
schedule February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wonderful chapter. I was sad to learn that Harry had to treat him rude in order for Severus to get pregnant, however, it was so cute that he actually try to help Severus with out Severus knowing what he was doing. Making him pay with out making him suffer that was nice. I love the way you made the reader go through every emotional step that Severus felt while he was being taken, lost, scare, and emotionally drain.

I cannot wait for the next chapter, and I knew it. This story is almost over, but I be sad, I will miss my boys. You're doing wonderful keep it up.
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've spent the better part of my day reading this and I just love it! I wanted to email you and ask you to consider posting your stories at TheRabidReader.com, cause I'm just completely in love with this story!
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Finally! ^_^ Dear sweet Harry...
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story sooo much. I have followed it from the beginning and every time you update I feel like it is Christmas. I love that Harry finally pulled his head out of his ass. I cannot wait until the next chapter.