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Chpt. 3 haha, love it ---> "He opened his eyes slowly and smirked.

Chpt 7 -- you NEED to update!
That was awesome, looooovvvve this story. Like it so much better than your others.
By far this is my fav! :)

Hi lady,
Thanks for the response and you were right I did love this chapter because lord it was just like I imagined a scenario with on of my developing plot bunnies were voldemort comes to meet her much to her surprise and spends time intruding on hermione's home just to scare her, shock her, be around her and all that and then i read this it was so much fun...lol. And I love how possessive of her he is and his need to protect her and want her. It was great. Keep it up

Oh my God!!! That was AMAZING! Loved it... and especially the ending... where it is explained why she won't go with the Order but will stay with Voldemort forever... BRILLIANT! Keep it up and post post post soon.

Oh wow, you changed it. I feel so very important now. ;-)
But I gotta say, it's only a few altered words, but they make a huge difference in perception. You've turned it from simple fanfic Order bashing into a real reason for Hermione to stick with him.
And I know exactly what you mean in your email when you said you had to fight to find the words to explain why she would go with him. When I write and it happens to me, those are the bits my eyes always focus on when I reread a chapter (the parts I am not completely satisfied with). Sometimes you're just too close to the material to get the right words and it takes time or a sudden "lightbulb" of inspiration to find them. I am glad I could provide you with a little help there.
BTW. FFnet works somewhat again, I could post a chapter there, but the alert never came and I still couldn't reply to reviews. Ugh.

Hi,

Also not able to post on FFnet? I was so happy to see you updated here. I was so bored, but now I had something to read. Loved the chapter, update soon. snort.

So, there is too much dentist talk around the table, eh. hihi (I'll have to email someone's parents). sniggers.

"after she made the mistake of telling her father about Viktor, the Bulgarian international Qudditch player, she had decided never to talk to her father about her love life again." - No, I can imagine. snort.

"Just because he was a good kisser?" - Well, that's one of the most important things to know about a man, Hermione. If they're no good in the kissing department, dump them. And if they are... well, who cares about the occasional mass murder, no wait. dump him Mione, HE IS MINE!

Oh, you can just feel that's there's company before you know for sure. Never take your pants down in the hallway when there may be a handsome dark lord... Oh what am I saying!? never mind.

I laughed so hard about this part: "Oh, Merlin, she couldn

A wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more.

hi lady,
thanks for the online reply, and I am so happy that you are happy and trust mje you are doing a great job with this story and ohhh chapter 5 is especially brilliant, we actually get more smut like things and we actually see his thoughts pertaining to his feelings and wants with hermione, and his quickly growing weakspot for her. I love the thickness and uncertainty of their relationship and her hangups and fears. its all so exciting and so promising, and I am so happy that u are a writer that finishes their stories...lol, I would hate to see this unfinished. so onto chapter 6, and sorry for the late reply my real life is extremely busy these days and it hell to get free time. Hope you well and keep up the great work.

chap 6: it was even better and i liked how you highlighted his his explaination of his thoughts about hermione. I absolutely loved how she blew up dumbledore, it was great, i think its high time the old fool got some lip from her. I cant wait for your next chapter so plz keep up the good work.

This is really good! You do an amazing job of keeping Voldemort in character! I cant wait for more