rate_review Reviews

The concept was great, but Sirius grew really out of character. I just can't see Sirius Black break that easily; he's a fighter, he has WAY too much pride. He has the most pride in the group. I mean, in the end, he was babbling about how he was theirs. They barely even had to force it out of him. I just don't think Sirius put up near enough of a fight.

this is really good is there going to be a sequel?

Wow.... just WOW.....
You say that this is only your first fanfiction?! GO WRITE SOME MORE!!!! I'm impressed. I'm not that into slash... but that was HOT!
More! Now! Please?! :)

oh, very nice... sequel?