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by SalonKitty

person acky
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Update something please. It's been like a week, I'm going insane........
person acky
schedule July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It feels like I have died and gone to Fanfic heaven. I absolutely love this story so far. It feels like you somehow read my mind and have incorporrated a lot of my favorite different kinks into the story. I also like how you differ from how you're writing MS&E by making Luna into a Domme which is the total opposite of how she is in your other wondrous tale. Please update soon
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. Not sure what I think quite yet I need to read a few more updates, but it's ver well written.
Pete
person MrStrike
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...and now I'm having a good day.

Seriously, this chapter, hell, this Fanfic makes me grin like a madman. Somehow, with all the memorable things actually going on in this chapter; Luna's handstand, Harry being left tied up (admittedly, this was a little expected), Harry's rather amusing hesitance and the inclusion of the other two, the thing that really made me laugh and will probably stay vividly in my head longest was Harry almost swooning. That little sentence had me choking.
As much as I normally prefer a more ... forward Harry, this is way too much fun to read.




person Elphaba
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy Hell that was an awesome chapter! Poor worn out Harry!
person acky
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD, this is undescribably hot. I love how you seem to be able to keep Luna her same quirky self while at the same time being this total sex-freak. Update soon. Oh btw the latest update of Mad Snorkacks was pretty good too lol
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Off to a great start! I'm not surprised Joe is to blame!
person MrStrike
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, that was awesome. You certainly know how to make an interesting first impression.

Found this completely by chance and I think I almost sprained something in the consequent double-take. Anyway, very fun reversal of Mad Snorkacks and Englishmen, had me grinning for a while after I read it. Everything was written very well as usual and I'm looking forward to seeing how this goes.
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not sure if it's fair of me to review since this was written with me for me, but rock on. I'm eagerly awaiting where I know this is going and know you're going to blow some minds. :)