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by SalonKitty

person Elphaba
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh My this has been awesome!
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well who'd have thought it with Luna ?

And getting her friends joining in..WOW !
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY I'm glad Luna got to be with harry. Thoe others were horrible.
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He is gonna snap soon. He has had no control of his life so far and will seek it when he realizes his love and trust has been violated. After all, trust is the most important emotion for a sub.
person acky
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Faints*

*Kitty finds several minutes later and wakes up with salt*

My god, that was absolutely awesome. I love how you're keeping the challenge at heart, but adding you're own bits of flair to it. Can't wait for another update of this or MS&E, I need stuff to read.
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. It definatly didn't lack sex. I'm also looking forward to the next chapter of 'MSE'.
Until nex time
person misaki
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is very interesting...i wonder what dominatrix luna has planned for her sub...
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you know i don't think i really noticed any mistakes at all. then again i was pretty enthralled, lol. this story is really something else. i can't wait to see what you come up with next. im bookmarking this story and plan to check back later to see if you've added any more chapters!
person acky
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another very hot chapter. You've yet to disappoint, cant wait to see what you have Luna do to Harry.
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story i like harry with luna they match up pretty good lunas personality is completly right from the books you can imagine her being a sex addict