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for Girls & Boys

by SalonKitty

schedule January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad lunas going after harry, i enjoy the times they spend together the best in this story. I find it amazing that you manage to get so much character depth out of what could have been mostly smut, as you have mentioned. So many writers lose sight of the characters in the midst of the sex, but you always have a strong sense of who they are at every moment. Such a good read, and i can't wait for you to update Mad Snorkacks and Englishmen. Thanks for the email by the way, it'd been so long since you updated, i'd gotten out of the habit of regularly checking. I'm a little worried about your new story though, don't quite think it'll be a pleasant read just by the description.
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter I look forward to the next update.
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update this story soon! The anticipation is killing me!
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm captivated by this story. I've only made it to chapter seven at this moment, because i'm slowly devouring it. The characters ring so true while moving in directions i can't imagine the actual ones would, yet it seems to flow so naturaly, I'm loving it almost as much as i did the real series. Though i suppose i'm dissapointed not to see more of hermione, i can understand how she wouldn't quite fit into this story. In all other respects its wonderful. The sex is more then i ever thought could occur in any story containing the carnal act. Its more then i can take at times, yet it does not offend, and i am actualy impressed by the writers unique imagination. The world of harry potter must lend itself to an amazingly broad range of ideas for the creative mind. The writer has captured a real element of the actual series in these charaters, its a pleasure to read it.
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I finally got around to really read Girls & Boys. I really like it. I can't believe I waited so long to read it. I especially got a kick out of chapter two when you described Harry's first reaction to Luna showing him off to her roommates. ANyway I'm definatly going to keep reading until I get caught up to the latest chapter.
PS. I also am looking forward to the next installment of MS&E.
person Oric13
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome series - incredibly hot.
Aside from writing very hot, very kinky sex scenes, you also got a knack for writing funny dialogue that fits the characters.

I am a little surprised at the very small role that Hermione plays in this story, considering what a huge part she plays in Harry's life in the books. Despite not being the gossipy kind, she surely must've heard about Harry's sex life by now and talked to him about it.

Anyhow, I also want to say that I very much enjoyed the plot-filled chapter 7. It felt like the story really needed a chapter like that and take a bit of a breather from all the sex (which Harry also needed). I hope you'll continue to show us more of Harry's "ordinary" Hogwarts life. This has the added benefit that it gives the sex scenes more impact.

Keep up the good work.
person Elphaba
schedule October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my! Wow, I need to go lay down, I'm tired...
person acky
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Thud* I don't want this story to ever end. Even though nothing really happened with Harry and the other girls in the RoR you still manage to bring out such an amazing sense of just pure sexuality and lust. I almost feel bad for Luna missing out on this, or is she..... Hmmmm. But its her own fault. Im imagining the orgy unfold in my mind and I'm sure you'll just blow my vision out of the water. Absolutely cannot wait for the next installment. Don't be depressed by not having many reviews, when I look at my story, I just like to think sometimes that ppl are so blown away that they forget to leave a review. I think thats about my whole review so........ Update something else, Nao..... <3's Kitty

person acky
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
One thing I forgot to add, Good luck with your One-Shot, you totally have to send it to me when you're done.
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really found this story interesting. It is like the fantasy of fantasies. Trying to be the other gender with all intent of going back again.

What a way it could be to learn each others small quirks better.

....and the story was a big turn on :P

Thank you! (btw. how do I know when the next chapter is out? is there a notification system, that I cant figure out?)