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Go Harry go! YOU CAN DO IT!

i like your story, i hope ron does not get left out. he need some sex, and the feeling of being close.

That's probably one of the hottest things I've EVER read in any story....fan fiction, regular fiction, Playboy/Hustler fiction. You kept them both in perfect character and made it so believable and damn...it was just HOT. Thank you.

That was awsome. Incredably hot. Can't wait for the next installment.

I won't lie. I was glad when Harry did what he did. Luna was abusing the trust and faith he had in her and as a man, I certainly wouldn't have sat there and just forgive her. Good story through and through

My word, you do write some fascinating stories. And how on earth do you write so much sex without any of it being repetitive? I might have to go back and analyse your writing later so that I can figure it out. It's rather difficult to have an analytical brain in gear on a first read through!

I'm up to chapter 3 - and yes, you definitely write well from the male perspective. The feminist and gender issues you are toying with are exceptionally well considered - and lead to some very hot sex.

Brill!

Well, me and alot of other people are starting to get worried. Its been a while since your last update, like 2 months...and i'm worried you might have grown tired of this story and given up on it. i certainly hope thats not the case. i would love to read more of this story, i want to know what lunas plan is. i hope you can finish this.

Now I'm not sure, If I like this one or the other one more. I think I prefer the sex in this one and the story in the other one. Which I think is fair because the story in the one hasn't had as long a build up as the other one and is obviously less plot heavy taking place in the forgettable Half Blood Prince as opposed to Deathly Hallows.

Oh and poor Harry's a damn idiot thinking with his dick like that. Could just seeing all that end up tears and embarrassment and so it did, or will.

Really liking your depiction of Daphne Greengrass though; for a character who had all of one line in the seven books; she's fucking hot in this.

I just thought you should know that this is THE best fanfiction I have EVER read. KEEP IT UP, please! :) *hugs*

amazing!! i just finally got caught up and i really cant wait till the next chapter!!