rate_review Reviews

Ok, I have to say that I really like this story. I don't usually go for such out of character work...to me, it's a much better piece if the author can somehow manage to get the characters to stay in character while fucking their brains out...but regardless, this is an exceptional piece, excellent writing from an exceptional author. Kudos, kitty, kudos.

Okay, I just read this is one go and wow! I love Luna in this. She has all the control, yet still remains totally in character. I'm a huge fan of femslash and that chapter with Harry poly-ed into Daphne was hot. What inspired me to review was the latest chapter. I have a huge soft spot for Harry and Hermione's friendship and the entire chapter was amazing. I loved their bond in this. And watching Harry take control for once and seeing how much enjoyment he got from it was wonderful. And it makes so much sense that Hermione would have a submissive streak because she is always so eager for approval, eager to please. This was fantastic!! (Any chance we will be seeing Hermione involved more? I would love to see what Harry AND Luna would do with the girl.) :)

My, thatTHAT was hot. For me the hottest scene in the whole story. And I don't even know exactly why.
Surely beeing it just Hermione has some part in it, she is easily the most passionate girl around. Her totally giving up pretense and submit to her most secret cravings, whoa.
But the most important factor to make that chapter great is that you make me SEE it happening. I love the details: HG's simple non-padded bra, her the her knickers at her ankles instead of in a twist.
Keep it up!

I love that story.
Reading this chapter, I was thinking about additional uses of polyjuice. How about totally unlikely pairings? Like: Neville dominating McGonnagall, or Flitwick dom Snape, or Trelawny dom Dumbledore. Something like this. Like this idea?

Apart from this, I'm very curious where the story is heading. Thank you.

This is an amazing story. It has a lot of vivid imagery and a great plot. If you need a beta reader let me know through PM or email

Great chapter, loved the Harry and Hermione scene. After all that has happened I hope that Harry doesnt let himself get swept up with Luna so easily. She did break Harry's trust and she should work at earning his trust back, Harry shouldnt have to do everything. She was a fault too.

Holy goodness, I think that has to one of the hottest scenes you've written yet. It got this perfect mix of the bdsm stuff, coupled with what is feel is clearer consent on what's happening. So its more playful than the harder Master/slave stuff you do. Despite this originally being a Harry/Luna fic, this chapter really sold me on it morphing into full on Harry/Hermione.

I must admit when I imagined this morphing into a sex scene, I thought that Harry would remain submissive and Hermione would be taking charge in her typically bossy way but the build up to the scene was completely in character. I loved Harry feeling guilty about perving on Hermione and slight scene of unreality and disbelieve he had that he was going to get to screw his best friend. Hermione very dry technical description of the act she want was so her and the way it got hotter and hotter as she lost control...

Yeah, Well worth the wait. But now I can't wait to see wear this heading. I can well imagine Harry becoming involved with Hermione permantly from this, though I suppose he'll eventually make up with Luna. Perhaps He'll end up with both? Being submissive to luna and Dominating Hermione? Though Hermione knows he likes being submissive, so maybe she'll be up to try the domme role as well? THat'd be cool if they had a relationship where they both played both role at one time or another....

And on a completely different note: the capatcha for this review was 'athletic chessmen' I mention this for no other reason than I found it amusing.

Hm. Yeah. Well, that was quite good, wasn't it.

Uhm...

*dead faint*

What a wild ride with Hermione, a frend with benefits.

Thanks for writing
MPF

OMG, I think I just died and went to heaven. You know how big of a Harmony fan I am and that H/Hr scene has got to be one of the hottest things I have ever read in my life. I was grinning from ear to ear as I read through the chapter. I love how Hermione is a bit reluctant to give up control at first, but once she does boy does she ever. I thought the way you worked up to it too with Harry kind of unintentionally coaxing that side out of her was a really neat way to go about it. But enough of my rambling on not really making sense, simply put OMG. Update something else soon :), Im dyin here.