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by SalonKitty

person Eduardo
schedule January 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Buen relato. porfa continualo.
Porfa escribir que Harry no domina solo a Heremione, sino tambien a Ginny y que ella se les une en un encuentro los 3 juntos
person Eduardo
schedule December 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Porfa actualiza pronto
person Ruth
schedule November 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Didn't expect much, but stayed for the sex. If it had been a mindless stroke story I probably wouldn't have been as bothered by the complete lack of likable characters. I found it impossible to empathize with anyone save Hermione and to a degree Harry, which made for an all around depressing read as the humiliating parts that I loved never felt deserving or satisfying.
person Eduardo
schedule February 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Buen relato, actualiza pronto
person Sera21
schedule July 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow Luna is a kinky girl!So hot! the only complaint I have is that when Harry takes polyjuice he shouldn't need glasses if that person has normal eyesight. AS proven by book 2 when he turns into Goyle and doesn't need his glasses.
person vav38
schedule April 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the great story!
Look likes Luna is a switch and likes to be dominated as well (or at least rough sex). Since Harry also enjoyed domination in Ch10, it is really intriguing how the relationships Harry/Luna and Harry/Hermione might have developed. And don't forget about Daphne!
The whole story might be as well the beginning of a greater thing, worth "Mad Snorkacks and Englishmen". I wish the Author would have found the inspiration.
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Question: Is Luna eventually going to turn Harry into a girl?
person Korlanthan
schedule April 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just finished reading through the story; and, unlike many other fics on this site, there is actually a story to go with a lot of mind-blowing sex. Harry's relationship with Luna is... unique, to say the least, but no less interesting for it. Here's hoping you update this eventually!
schedule September 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
o.o

very good. love your characters though there isn't enough luna time xD
interesting take you have on her.

need more.

soon. @_@
schedule January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, are you going to be writing another chapter soon?