rate_review Reviews

I love this fic! Very well done!

you really need a beta with you when writing this to fix a lot of problems with the story, some of it, because of the terrible spelling errors, makes this a little hard to read at times.
harry is written pretty well, but the way you've written lucius is odd. never have i read where lucius comes off like snape! i love lucius, hes my favorite character of the book and movie series, and he's not that cold in the way you've written him. also, this man is a death eater to the core, the fact that he would not force himself of haryry MONTHS a go is just silly. it fees like you're going the way of the "twlight" series, making poor lucius wait til marriage. that's just silly in this day and age. 25 chapters and worthless kissing...*sigh* i've already read this far, so i will finish, and i hope you'll get the the end soon and make good and sure the sex scene is bloody hot

This is intriguing despite the grammatical errors.

Is there any way you can let your readers know when you have a new chapter?

OMFG!!!!!
where is a new update to this?!
oh please update it soon?!!!!

Go Scary Harry. Can't wait for the next chapter bet it'll be funny.

Can't wait for chapter 24!!! I had my wisdom teeth extracted in high school. Uncomfortable but doable.

Awesome story, very well written and I love what just happened with Bealtrix escaping. A great opponent for Harry might be Pansy though. If she doesn't think she can get Draco she would probably set after Lucius since he just got divorced.

Yay, I so love this pairing but it's so hard to find well written stories....but here you are! I love this story and I'm so happy to see that it will have a happy ending, I'm a sucker for happy endings. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful fic. I find that most author's don't pair up these two half as believably as you have done, I truly do love it. It's just off-canon enough to work but without losing Lucius' Slytherin personality, which is a must for me. I can't wait for more! ^_^

Chapter 23 please!!!

I like this story very much. Despite the lack of smut (at least up to the current chapter 22) I really enjoy the plot. It's not overly complicated or evil, it's a bit smart and fun and sweet.
I am glad to hear it'll have a happy ending. I like a good story that can make you cry every now and then, but it's the best to have a satisfying happy ending.
I cannot wait to hear thoughts from Lucius next time, perhaps a new insight into his evolving feelings towards Harry. Since the last extensive thoughts from Harry was more about Harry's power and such.
I would have expected more blow-ups from Draco, but I guess him keeping it under the lid is logical with Lucius being so authoritative.
Would LOVE to see Lucius be more possessive & protective of Harry. In an unexpected way maybe? or privately. And I hope there'll be more intimacy or intimate moments centered on our lovely couple.

I'm interested in the idea of the epilogue. I must admit I'd love a sequel much more.

I do see the a few grammar mistakes here and there. They're not detrimental, but they do feel weird. If you don't have a beta yet, I could offer my assistance.

Great work and I'm glad to be reading it. Cheers~