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for Unexpected Things

by windy

schedule March 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
L wD: that's it?!?! But I need moar~ lol :) please tell me you'll put up the rest?? I'll give you as many reviews as you want xD On a serious note though, I throughly enjoyed the story. I really liked the fact you made the 'relationship' between Lucius and Harry seem real with actual meaning instead of just mindless sex (though mindless sex can be good) lol I really look forward to reading more of your work and hope to see this completed soon (hint hint) :)
person Kip
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but you're right that you need a beta... any chance of your posting the rest of this?? 'Purr
schedule September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oooh, i cannot wait til you update this!
person Lina03
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No matter how many times I reread this story, I just love it....I can't wait to read Lucius' reaction to all this! ^_^
schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed rereading this story and found that it is still stops at the last thing I remember reading the last time. I really hope that it is still being worked on, would love to read more. Please say that you are still working on it.
schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I've read it for hours now, just cause I couldn't stop reading. I really hope that you'll update it soon, cause I really want to know what happens.
schedule May 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story was quite interesting. I'm guessing you are a non-native speaker of English but your writing has definitely improved as the story went on. It's much better written towards the end. The plot is quite good as well.

I'm wondering if you plan to finish this? I usually don't read WIP stories. I read this because I assumed it was finished since you had two other stories started after it. I just hate that feeling of impatient curiosity I get when I get to the end of a story and it isn't finished.

Anyway, I did enjoy it so far and hope that eventually there is an end to it. Nice job so far.
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oops!!!!!!! chpter 27 please!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, Harry really likes playing with fire huh. No way in hell is Luc going to let him going if he knows about the Hallows.
btw, is Harry still a Horcrux? That'd make things awkward.
schedule January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loved the up date. can't wait to see what harry got pland.