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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Weak walls!!!! OMG that was the explosion that had to happen. Did they do a little air clearing there or is that just the start of one hell of a passionate beginning. I'm sure though, that this chapter is nothing compared to what's coming next. :)
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3
I am so damn impressed. This chapter is like perfect and you wrote it with minimal words. I wish I could do that.
The build up was excellent. I was grinning from ear to ear. Then when Draco showed up I was titillated about what would happen between them, and then you didn
I am so damn impressed. This chapter is like perfect and you wrote it with minimal words. I wish I could do that.
The build up was excellent. I was grinning from ear to ear. Then when Draco showed up I was titillated about what would happen between them, and then you didn
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4
This chapter was hilarious! I love how Draco just keeps getting angrier and angrier. He is like a wet cat, then the explosion at the door. LOL
I don
This chapter was hilarious! I love how Draco just keeps getting angrier and angrier. He is like a wet cat, then the explosion at the door. LOL
I don
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned lately how much I love this story? Cause I do...
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can feel the sexual tension
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hha ha ha ha...this was a very very amusing chapter!! From blond baboon to Buckbeak's bitch and everything in between I thoroughly enjoyed reading and am only upset that lucius and narcissa interrupted at the end there.
Have I mentioned that I am loving this little story??
Brilliant work!
Lady B*
Have I mentioned that I am loving this little story??
Brilliant work!
Lady B*
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow what a great chap... i love it they really have a lot of sparks flying when they are around!!!! great chap... loved it i can not wait to read more
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Very nice, sounds like the "fights" my boyfriend and I have. Can't wait to see what you have coming!
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, kick his ass Narcissa, he'll spoil it all! Stupid guy what is he thinking?
Hermione must be seethin with rage! They'll probably raze the whole manor before Draco admits that he was a stupid, stupid idiot (wait, he's a man...I think I just stated the obvious)! And him being jealous? Well, what the hell did he think Hermione would do? Stay at home, docile and nice like some dumb little woman? Pfff...
I loved the way you made her tell him that she wasn't a cheat until she caught herself. SOOOO lovely. I can see her doing that! Had me grinning from ear to ear. I love a strong Hermione!
Hermione must be seethin with rage! They'll probably raze the whole manor before Draco admits that he was a stupid, stupid idiot (wait, he's a man...I think I just stated the obvious)! And him being jealous? Well, what the hell did he think Hermione would do? Stay at home, docile and nice like some dumb little woman? Pfff...
I loved the way you made her tell him that she wasn't a cheat until she caught herself. SOOOO lovely. I can see her doing that! Had me grinning from ear to ear. I love a strong Hermione!
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh I just started and finished today. I love it. I can see everything happening so vividly in my mind. I adore stories that can pull off that efect and not many at all have been able too. I commend you and your brilliance! Your a great writer and Ia dmire your talents. I hope to see more. Much more from you.
All kinds of love and respect
xo
dM
All kinds of love and respect
xo
dM