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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! The insults!!! that killed me....perfectly written...that was funny as hell!! You could feel the passion even when they were arguing...bloody brilliant. LOL!!! oooo, so things are working out with Troy, eh? I'm glad Narcissa tried to talk some sense into him..This was FUNNY! Loving it.
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter killed me! I loved the snappy dialogue between Hermione and Draco, the name calling was especially funny! I also loved when Narcissa and Lucius ran up to see what all the commotion was and Draco replied, "Weak Walls." You are building up to one heck of an explosion between the two, I can't wait to see the fireworks. Awesome story, Sweetie!
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I just discovered your stories and you are already in my top 5 favorites. This is one of the most creative plots I've seen in combination with the marriage law fics. I can't wait to see how you get these two together, if that is your plan. I like the fact that your Hermione and Draco are realistic to their canon characters. I am by no means a cannon natzi however oocness can ruin a potentially great plotline. Love the power struggle and I can't wait for more. By the way I'm in the middle of "Her Shoes" and it is just brilliant. Well done!!
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was AMAZING!!! The fight was epic. I loved every second, please update soon!
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I love how their magic keeps causing them to destroy things. Draco really is going to have to change his ways if he ever wants to shag Hermione, LOL. Look forward to the next chapter!
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha! This is fun. :) I love watching these two lose it with each other, especially in an immature (but still adult) way that doesn't involve whining. Well played, especially with the volley of insults.
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it cant wait to read more please please please update soon
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More, more, MORE!!!!!!!!!!
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok, that was awesome! i've had arguments like that and yes, it's always funnier when you're watching! Now hat Draco is back, Lucius needs to send them to another estate--One of Draco's so they can pay for the repairs. Don't care how rich Lucius is, that's gotta be expensive.
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love all the tension between the two of them...great job...as usual i wish it were longer...i even waited and read two chapters at once and it still wasn't enough!