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for Accidental Magic

by margaritama

schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He grinned wolfishly...I loved that! great chapter...
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
finally! they did it! great chapter...again!
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was incredibly HOT!!! You write Draco's passion so well....::::content sigh:::: Thanks for that..I'm glad they finally got together and really admitted their feelings..and wow, the magic! LOL@at the insults, they are funny too....but I was afraid for Hermione playing with Draco about sleeping someone else..lol. Thank goodness it worked out. Can't wait to see their morning after. Great writing, Margarita.
person Anon
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is it wrong of me to want to cheer? LOL Knew she was weakening the moment she told her admirer she was going to try and make her marriage work and it wasn't fair to 'lead him on'. And Draco, when he finally got the stick out of his arse, worked out what he wanted to. LMAO on every time he thought about his mother and realised she was right. (That little comment comes back to haunt us all I think). Delish!!!!!
person Robs
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous chapter! Who knew it would be Draco making the effort, not Hermione. I like that twist. And they finally got it together! Look forward to more!
person tsorg
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the line:
person smmz79
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was fabulous... their love scene was powerful... you did not go on and on about every detail but you made it like a dance an intimate mating of two souls i think that was one of the best love scenes i have read i really did like it....
person Coipje
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you know I waited all day for a new chapter ;)
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, loved it, loved it!
person kazfeist
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How nice they were finally honest with one another, eh? Shame it doesn't often happen so in RL. :D