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for Accidental Magic

by margaritama

person Anon
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The second chapter with its background had nothing of the 'spark' of chapter three. The coward ran rather than face her and OMG I would have been furious too when Theo stood there instead of Draco on their wedding day but oh the tension when she entered that room and they saw each other for the first time since the announcement was made. And it was so passionate and hot, literally swept away by their desire before she managed to come to her senses. LOVED IT!!! :) You make him work for it, darlin!!!!

person jaceni50
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like where this story is headed and am glad everything isn't so easy for Draco. :) Hope you update soon. Really looking forward to more.
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!! I love it!!! I cannot wait to see what happens next!!!


I'm a little excited, can't ya tell;)
person Robs
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh dear Draco, you really shouldn't have said that! I really thought she was going to let him do it then, LOL. He had to ruin it for himself. Look forward to the next chapter!
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
god this was so good and soooo different, brilliant and explosive, I wanted hermione to wring his neck, i will settle for the slap though..lol good girl get back to his senses, and was good that he couldnt sleep with anyone else. But it was hot. Please update soon.
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great... please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Draco is a complete and utter, many words that I won't type. :). Wounderful chapter love!
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1

Oooo, now you have me wondering what
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2

LOL! You always crack me up. Befriended the tow-headed twerp
person IConsrea
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked Nice Shoes, for the most part. This one looks like it's going to be good. Can't wait for the next chapters!