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ch 7 - I'm curious as to The Plan that Severus thinks Lucius should disclose to Hermione, but it's fine if you want to hold off on it. OR, you could have Severus and Lucius discuss it (so that the curious readers know what it is) but still keep Hermione in the dark. Either way, I'm enjoying this story! My favorite and most poignant Lucius line this chapter: "Unless I decide to be obliviated, and I

Sorry I wasn't around to review the last chapter, although I did read of course. The breakfast chapter was good with beautiful detail and Snape's presence. Hermione can be a bit of a menace, she threatened to smash a window! I liked the next chapter even better. I really enjoyed all the conflict between them because it's like a middle-class person and then there is this aristocratic man who wants perfect etiquette. In fact, with the super long table it reminded me of a movie I recently saw, "The Duchess." The newly weds also sat at a long table that way. I am of course wondering what the plan is but I am eager for the consummation night too! I feel the plan has something to do with reeling in those Gryffindors you mentioned who now control the ministry. I just hope Snape/Lucius don't use Hermione like a puppet.

Don't you dare take out the smut! You write it too well!!! Very good chapter very funny! The dinner table was a laugh and a half.

"The highlight of the meal for her was when she tucked her napkin into the top of her dress and plopped both elbows onto the table as she ate. The look on the blond wizard

okay my dear you have two options one just go right to what ever the slytherins where planning and just skip the smut, but be warned that we will have to hunt you down and kill you--of course. or you other option and the best one, just give us the smut and satisfy us because you know we are all less cranky when we get it and it just would not be you and your story if you didn't. :) so try not to keep us waiting any longer cause like lucius we have no more patince. :) so do post quick like if you please!!! :)

I imagine that Hermione will be angry, even if the sex is good, and you will use it to fuel the story. As much as my curiosity get to me sometimes I would certainly not demand any changes from a writer. It is your story, I'm just enjoying it.

And how would anyone want the smut cut out?

I love the mystery of not know why Lucius and Hermione had to be wed. It gets my mind working. I need my smut so don't you dare cut it out! LOL. Nothing is going to be easy in the malfoy house for a while is it? Just the way I like it :)

More please with sugar on top.

Chapter Seven: I feel like being petulant and retorting 'yes, do cut out all the smutty bits and tell us what the plan is.' I apologise for having the audacity to be curious... You always make me laugh, though, LaBib, so no matter. Anyway, Lucius's aristocratic airs--though agitating to some--only endear him to me more; I can't resist blue-blooded pomposity, especially when the pomposity belongs to such a delicious man as Lucius Malfoy. Hermione's recalcitrant and coarse behaviour, however, is not so endearing; elbows on the table, napkin tucked into her neckline, all inexcusably uncouth. She certainly does need a good spanking; the lick of the tawse on her rear would set her straight. But I know Lucius will teach her some manners in time. After all, this is the taming of the shrew, is it not? Another thing that makes Lucius a perfect lover is his exquisite sartorial taste. I'm hesitant to make this assertion, but the wizard is a bit of a metrosexual, isn't he? 'It

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Hello there. :-) Well, as much as it will pain me to wait, I think I will TRY to be okay with them "getting closer" first. LMAO I trust you to write your story your way, so just keep writing and I'll keep reading. What I think I love most is that you've made me feel sorry for the "bad guy." lol I mean honestly, he's an unapologetic former Death Eater who manipulated her into a marriage against her will. He's planning something with Severus that it seems will piss her off, if not also hurt her somehow. And, he's keeping her captive, while berating her every breath. But, somehow, you've made me see HIS vulnerability and feel bad for HIM?! That's the beauty and wonderfulness of your writing! Good for you! I honestly hope your hurry and get the next chapter up soon. I will be waiting. :-) Thank you! HG4eva