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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a perfect exploration of his naked backside and now I'm all atwitter for the continued venture. ;-) Seeing things from her point of view was lovely and (ahem) hot! I do want to know the secret and all, but no rush. Should you feel the need to extend their getting to know each other for a bit until she is fully lulled into a false sense of "relaxed and satisfied" security, I promise to bot balk. tee hee hee Thank you once again and please please feel the need to update again very soon! HG4eva
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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch 8: I'm with Lucius, Cats do not belong in the bedroom! (or in the house, but hey, Im a dog person) Nice little interlude, love the wrist cuffs ;) Nothing says foreplay like a nice massage....so, is he the type who returns the favor? I guess I have to read and see.
Love the quidditch collection, I think Im up for a game.
Happy Writing,
S_G
Love the quidditch collection, I think Im up for a game.
Happy Writing,
S_G
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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh I've been a horrible lurker turned reviewer. Granted....I hadn't even known you'd updated so many new chapters. I was like two behind! It was glorious to realize that! lol
For my horrible crappy-ness with not reviewing more often, I rated. I have NEVER done that for a story, so it was a big deal! lol
Oh boy oh boy am I ever enjoying this. Your Lucius is so enticing. His calm kind of fury and the 'Be Still' yeah...I just want to be Hermione.
And how awfully mean of you to leave this last chapter as you have. Oh my.... the things my mind conjured for next chapter....phew!
Your characters have such life...I truly love that about your stories. I find as a writer myself such a struggle in giving something to my characters and envy greatly the ability you have for it. I also admire it!
Thank you for writing. Without your story/stories....my down time after a hectic day would be brutally boring!!!
All sorts of love and respect!
xoxo
dM
For my horrible crappy-ness with not reviewing more often, I rated. I have NEVER done that for a story, so it was a big deal! lol
Oh boy oh boy am I ever enjoying this. Your Lucius is so enticing. His calm kind of fury and the 'Be Still' yeah...I just want to be Hermione.
And how awfully mean of you to leave this last chapter as you have. Oh my.... the things my mind conjured for next chapter....phew!
Your characters have such life...I truly love that about your stories. I find as a writer myself such a struggle in giving something to my characters and envy greatly the ability you have for it. I also admire it!
Thank you for writing. Without your story/stories....my down time after a hectic day would be brutally boring!!!
All sorts of love and respect!
xoxo
dM
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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8
Well, I have seen lots of descriptions of Lucius, or as I call him, Luscious, but this one takes the prize. You have actually managed to describe him so well that I shared the description with my husband (he's blind, so I have learned a lot about description). He said that he could 'see' Lucius in his mind's eye.
Five stars from him, and a blue ribbon in description from me.
Well, I have seen lots of descriptions of Lucius, or as I call him, Luscious, but this one takes the prize. You have actually managed to describe him so well that I shared the description with my husband (he's blind, so I have learned a lot about description). He said that he could 'see' Lucius in his mind's eye.
Five stars from him, and a blue ribbon in description from me.
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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Where can I buy a Lucius? lol Wow you certainly did paint a work of art in that chapter hehe please write some more!!
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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hot!!!!! Can't wait for the seduction to continue.
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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know what to think about a harry potter taming of the shrew.It has been done over and over.(movies,book,comic and other fanfics)How ever I am a fan of your writting so I thought what the hey.I am glad I started reading.I was able to picture the rub down in my head from your writting...Lucky Hermione.So where is Harry?How is Ronny boy going to take it?
Does anyone care about Hermione outside of plots and plans?
Does anyone care about Hermione outside of plots and plans?
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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8:
What a delightful chapter, you had me laughing so hard I started to tear up. My god, the line: You always look so flamboyant and operatic, the way you twitch them into place like a pantomime villain committing skullduggery. You could do with some loosening up.
What a delightful chapter, you had me laughing so hard I started to tear up. My god, the line: You always look so flamboyant and operatic, the way you twitch them into place like a pantomime villain committing skullduggery. You could do with some loosening up.
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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed that. Hermione's responses were really fun, a delight. She is very sexually naive: a dingle-dangle? Even though she knows she's being seduced she did go along with it, so he does have something to look forward to. She really is in over her head there, but wow, what a way to go.
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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am an intermittent lurker, thank you very much. We are quite distinct from the garden-variety, mainly in that our guilt cycle is significantly shorter, resulting in multiple reviews per story, rather than a single "Sorry I didn't review earlier" review at the end. *sniffs*
Sorry about that, reading so much about Lucius has got me feeling rather haughty.
Feel free to take all the time you want describing Lucius! If I'm that desperate for smut, I can always read one of your other stories! Actually, my lack of demands is more based on the feeling that I have not built up enough "reader capital" to have any influence... Anyway, swell, superb, tophole (yes, I consulted a thesaurus) chapter! Looking forward to your next!
Sorry about that, reading so much about Lucius has got me feeling rather haughty.
Feel free to take all the time you want describing Lucius! If I'm that desperate for smut, I can always read one of your other stories! Actually, my lack of demands is more based on the feeling that I have not built up enough "reader capital" to have any influence... Anyway, swell, superb, tophole (yes, I consulted a thesaurus) chapter! Looking forward to your next!