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"Now he had to aim left off center to be anywhere on target and his incantations occasionally sputtered, like an engine running out of gas, but it usually worked with a few encouraging shakes." That's a euphemism for an aging wizard's willie if ever I heard one. lmao

This is absolutely hilarious thus far, and I can't wait for the updates.

Yummy. Nice snappy sparring and lots of nice thought provoking comments about what is under Lucius

sex. NOW!!! ooh im going mad

Ah, LaBib...I love you. I just noticed you were writing a new story. I've been immersed in the real world for a while, but I'm so glad I noticed this. I just love your Lucius. But only to read about. I couldn't handle such an overbearing, conceited man like him. Well, maybe if I got to see that fine body you fantastically described, I might be convinced. You're an artist. You described him delightfully.

Let's see...previous chappies...I think their verbal sparring is hilarious, and I loved that you put Severus and Narcissa together.

And the thing I've laughed at most was Hermione's wet English Channel!

(Ch. 8)

I do not have much time for reading so I have been very slow to get through this and to comment. A great start. I like the tension you have built. You have caught Malfoy

I couldn't resist. Procrastination rocks :)

Haha! Lucius Malfoy turning up to your room naked! Giggle :D

He made the right choice with the pine. Yes he did.

I can relate to the feeling of wanting to pet Lucius. I'm sure all of us can ^.^

Arghhh! Nooo! Forget anything I said about putting off smut... I lied! *Bangs head repetitively against wall*

You master of the evil cliffie, you!

Can't wait for more. I'll schedule in a little procrastination for next week :D

I can just picture Lucius in my head after the scene sitting in a large leather chair, legs crossed with a SMIRK on his face...his trail of thought would probably be like : that's right bitches lol no too common for him. I L O V E the interactions between our slippery, blonde haired man and Hermione. In some passages if I were Lucius I would have snapped...the whole spanking thing would definatly be appropirate or tieing her up or something cause damnit she gets away with soo much! I think the way Lucius is trying to gently domesticate her (maybe not the right word, but I think in this instance Hermione is more of a wild cat than Lucius) is definatly a good idea. I think when Hermione looses someo f her prudishness (''you have sex on this table?'' I burst out laughing at that part...in my head I was telling Hermione : sweetie, sex isn't confined to the bedroom GASP...or a bed DOUBLE GASP..you'll see..*wink* *wink*.) and gains abit of confidence they're going to be explosive in and out of bed.
LOVE YOUR STORY!!

I don't think there are any words right now to describe that chapter. The way you described Lucius' body was... was.... perfect. Now, I am going to stop review so you can get back to writing the next chapter! Hurry!! :)

You end this here? Seriously? Oh, how cruel you are! Now that Hermione gets a bit into it...Ah well, we'll just have to wait, right? Not that I like the idea at all!

And I am wondering what the plot is about. What are Severus and Lucius up to? Can't wait to find out more.

As always, excellent story so far!

Wow your description of Lucius is simply amazing, and that was sexy as hell!!!!!!!!!!!! More please this is getting to the good part.