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Hahaha! Hermione is so ornery doing that to Lucius

Well, based on the picture and his technique, I'd like to place an order for one Lucius Malfoy, please. He can be delivered directly to me and I will even pay double for shipping and handling. Thank you!

Tee hee hee That was fun and funny in parts. I actually snorted out loud at the centaur/chihuahua thought. :-)

Thank you! HG4eva

Chapter 9: Titillating tool? That has to be one of my favorite descriptives! Awkward and hot at the same time. Loved the reality of it, the awkwardness of new lovers trying to learn each other, trying to figure out what would please the other. Though Hermione and her claws seemed a happy accident for ol' Lucius.

I dont think she will have any future issues with giving Lucius access to her body, access to her heart will be a long time coming for this stubborn version of Hermione Granger. Lucius seems a bit walled in emotionally, still feeling the sting of his divorce. I can relate. Lovely lemons, real and engaging. Wonderful work, dearest =)


Happy Writing,
S_G

Well, he did warn her! Loved the image of the centaur and the chihuahua, LOL! So sorry I haven't been reviewing, but RL has been nasty lately. So, Weasley was living up to his name, hmm? LMAO. Eagerly awaiting more!

Hermione's Knowledge enlarges? I was thinking more on the lines of Lucius enlarges ...

Turn off the lights? What?!? And miss the view? UGH, poor uneducated Hermione.

Pucker up, the lemons were great!

A pine scented Lucius... *giggle*, I'm just imagining a tiny, naked Lucius car freshener :D

I was like "Elf? Huh?" and then after a little while "Ohhhh! Elf! Lol!". Fortunately no elf in the family; unfortunately the head banging is all me :(

Linstock is from Australia? I'm from Australia! *Waves hello*

"Now where

Chapter 9:

I think I would be heady with the feel of Lucius' naked bottom under my hands, yowza! My goodness, the man has some moves on him, didn't he like what Hermione's massage had evolved to or was he worried he might spend a little too soon! Either way, she's dealing with a preditory regardless as to how courageous she becomes!

Charmed pine cologne... Lucius is such a Slytherin!

Did Lucius womanize while with Narcissa or did he gain his reputation after their marriage ended?

Very clever, Hermione always wonders about how Lucius will fit and I love that you turned it around this time on Lucius, "tighter than a mermaid's arse!"

I love that even in her innocence she has the ability to make him lose control, although she doesn't know that yet! We get to peek into Lucius mind before she does!

What a masterpiece of a first coming together for the two of them, good lord, I need to go hose myself off! Very hot chapter, LaBib!!!!

Wow!! 100th reviewer?!?!? Do I get a prize! ;) Actually, I will take that chapter as my prize. That was one of the most amazing scenes to read and imagine in my mind! Fantastic. Ouch, on both their parts though. I am very curious to read both of their reactions the morning after. Do we find out who Hermione's first partner was? Did I miss it? Anyways, I can imagine Lucius giving Hermione a hard time about it. I am very happy to hear you are working on your next story! Too often the quality we receive from your stories is absent from most stories. Keep up the great writing.

That was incredibly WICKED.
This was just way too hot, but at the same time hilarious.
I love how you made it more realistic than other stories.
This is definitely one of my fave.
Update soon, please!

P.S: A centaur fucking a chihuahua, really? That's hilarious.

"opening her surprised mouth with his tongue and reminding her that his expertise wasn