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schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh blindfold and feathers :) He can throw in some leather and whips too, if he wants to!

Hermione looks likes she has bit of a wild streak. Too bad she is afraid to let it out, or afraid when she does. I hope Lucius can teach her the difference between causing pain with the intent to hurt and causing pain with the intent to heighten pleasure. Of course that is a fine line within itself. The need to start trusting each other, which I think is going to take some time.
person rini868
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
=O *gasp* another chapter for me to read in the same day? You are very awesome Labib!

Sprite, that's so cute :)

I think continued eye contact with Lucius might be a bit much for anyone. Even Hermione.

Sigh... when is Hermione going to accept the fact that Lucius is good for her? She needs to take a chill pill.

I'm trying to come up with some ideas as to what Severus and Lucius are planning but so far I've got nothing... oh well, I'll just have to wait and see I guess.

I better go to bed now, uni tomorrow, another 8am start. Woohoo!
person Anon
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I could never understand why some people just don't listen to what their bodies say they like and want. It only leads to problems down the road. Perhaps Hermione will learn to listen to what her body tells her and just go with the flow.

I've sent Lucius back to you. Thanks for the loan by the way! LOL.
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13: Well wasnt that delicious? Hermione nearly ruined one hell of an evening for herself with her viper's tongue. I find myself not liking her much. Perhaps it's because I always seem to go for the bad guy and would be thrilled to be bouncing in Lucius's bed LOL. I mean just the thought of looking up into that face, that long hair tickling forbidden places...I mean YUMMMMM! Hell, id let him chain me to the bed LOL....So...does this mean we will soon come across the title "Where the Wild Things Are?"

Alright...off to get things done, pleasant imagery in my head =)

Happy Writing!
S_G
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am sure I ordered one half-naked Lucius with the chain package. Any idea when it's coming? I am seriously needing my purchase to arrive soon!! lol I love that Hermione let herself go enough to enjoy him. I am sorry she doesn't know enough about great sex to understand that she should lose herself like that and do what feels good and right. But, I am sure Lucius will give her plenty of times to get used to it. ;-)

I loved his shock over her asking nicely. lol Cracked me up!

Thanks hon,
HG4eva
person marieve
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter. I LOVE the smut (who in their right mind doesn't..) but I really enjoy reading the interaction between the two of them. Hermione, damn she's got to retract her claws she's attempting to slash right through Lucius. Good thing Lucius has a firm hand.. ;)
person blue artemis
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
They need to find a way to communicate out of the bedroom, but I find their adventures quite hot. Hermione's naivete is not helping her, but I could totally agree with her statement of not liking him and yet finding him attractive.
schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh. Can I have a life size replica for my erm desk? Will you or Lucius be handing them out? LOL.
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait to see her spank him. I like how the story is going with how they are dealing with thier relationship.