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Chapter 14: Finally I got to read it!! I kept trying since you posted it but was always interrupted by a chorus of "Momma!" and the wonderful mishaps of trying to potty train a 2 year old. BUT NOW, FINALLY....

I agree with Hermione, I hate dressing for dinner. I always get something on my nice clothes. Snape and blackmail...I should be horrified Im certain but for some reason it fits. Lucius rising to the bait, however, is bothersome. Id think he would have plenty on old Snape to counter and attemts at coercion. I love that she assumes his role playing was about sex LOL....ol' Lucius is getting into her head already LOL...Oooo so a journey back to Hogwarts eh? And shes reluctant to return....Lucius as headmaster could be interesting...So...the drama begins.........


Happy Writing!!
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Nothing wrong with enjoying a spanking during sex, but Hermione seems to be equating enjoying herself with being evil. If she had some sort of religious background, I would have understood that kind of sexual repression. Is it solely because he was a Death Eater? She so equates that with evil that she figures that enjoying him sexually is also evil?

That was rather hot, all in all. I do like that he wanted her there when he woke up, that shows some underlying need which is not just sexual.

Chpts 13&14 loved them! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

There we go, a common project to ease them into tandem harness; plus Lucius gets to be all prtective of his wife's natural upset at being abck at the school. Nice twist on the Pureblood plight, I rather like it. Hoever, castigating all the 'rich' people will only get you an economic disaster--what is this, plot by magical communists? That might be rather ugly.

You are coercive! Somehow you knew that using words I didn't know would get me to review! How...Slytherin of you! What were you thinking, using a word like "soign

I have an offhanded question. Do you read H.P. Lovecraft by any chance? I only ask because words like pomposity, couturier, and d

Loved the chapter!!! I must tease...Do I smell a hit of affection between the two? Or a budding friendship? (The second was a hope and a tease lol) I'm very slowly being sucked into this story more and more. Now I am dying to know exactly why they chose Hermione to marry Lucius...*Pouts* I really want to know lol, I am waaaaay to curious for my own good sometimes. Keep up the great work!! Can't wait for the next chapter.


Lady Serin

I love and hate your cliffies all in the same breath. The mix of wit and plot movement you have used in this chapter is amazing. I can see them softening just the teeny tiniest bit, and what is even more enjoyable to me is that neither one realizes it. Once again, I have to commend your talent on being able to spin out a tale that keeps the reader totally engaged without frustrating or boring them. No matter how long or short your chapters are, there is always something new and interesting in them.

Lucius is going to have to deal with Hermione as a whole. She isn't a submissive personality in public, no matter what she might decides she likes in the bedroom. The plan is quite interesting, and I like the way she is planning it although I think it may take Lucius a while to appreciate that. She isn't blind, so why would she want him to change his face? I certainly wouldn't. But I think they underestimated how badly the war affected her mentally. She is going to have a hard time, and she probably won't tell him why.

I loved it when Lucius started to realize Hermione was just as take-charge outside of the bedroom and she was inside. And I'm loving the plot as it unfolds!